Red Spark had always dreamed of joining the fire brigade since he was small colt. Constantly running around the house making siren noises and using the garden hose to put out pretend fires around the house. After many years of chasing his dream, he's just graduated from the Canterlot Fire Academy and finds himself as the new pony at Fire Station 55 in Los Pegasus. These writings are his thoughts of the daily life as Firefighter.
Short chapters and seems to be all 1 paragraph soooo
I would give advice and try to help, but I'm no good at it. This is what I listen to for good story ideas
Fair enough, but I did design it to be short as if you are reading through Red Spark's Journal/Diary. So his scribblings are telling the story vs a traditional sense. Also I love that video as well.
But I do appreciate the feedback regardless!