• Published 30th Nov 2022
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A Shimmer of Obedience - Ebonyglow



With three ponies under his control, Anon has his sights set on a sudden visitor.

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LOVE the interactions between the "villain" group members :raritywink:

Isn't it supposed to be three mares in the description? Since he hasn't gotten Sunset yet

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First thing i noticed aswell. This story is absolutely unreadable. /s

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Lmfao yeah I guess I can’t count right when I’m high
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I am crying SO hard right now >:(

Sunset is one of my favorite characters, and I'm so into what you've done with her! I'll definitely be favoriting this story and continuing to keep up with the series!

I do love a good magic battle and that one was quite satisfying!
Also!
Beware the Ponk, she has been activated XD

Operation: Cock Block is now in effect.
Let's take this fucker out.

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It seems you don't approve with Anon then?

hope i get to the end without busting multiple times and falling asleep!

I wonder what the actual reason is that Celestia would mark anyone as sexless.

Seems rather harsh.

I'll tell you, if it were me, I would just leave. Plenty of other countries in the world. I her Multicursal is nice this time of year.

Monk

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To be fair, he didn't figure it out until he was two slaves in. Although the smarter option would definitely be to just take his slaves and the book and peace out before anyone else catches on.

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I mean, that would’ve been a good option, but…

Spoiler for some plot details down the line…

I never confirmed that the rule against him didn’t apply to other countries and creatures

This was beyond amazing, once again. This is seriously some of the best hypno content I've ever seen on fimfiction. Do you think the next story will feature Pinkie and Mrs. Cake? Or just Mrs. Cake? You obviously don't need to spoil if it's important to know.

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the cock will never be blocked!

Damn with all of these hypno sequels you're making i'm gonna have to read the first story tonight

files.everypony.ru/smiles/e3/82/a0ebd6.png - Anon, how could you?
files.everypony.ru/smiles/7f/49/dde8d6.png - I thought you were good. I thought we were friends.

In general, after reading this part of the story, I have a second theory about the order of Celestia. It lies in the fact that Celestia is aware of the sexual insatiability of humans and wants to protect her cute little ponies from a lustful monster. However, then the question remains open: who planted the book on the threshold of Anon's house?

Anyway, I am waiting for the following parts. Especially I'm waiting for the submission of a little purple know-it-all bitch.

Good luck and all the best.

This is some premium hypo content.

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I think just cake for now, but the author is like halfway done already maybe more so you should not have to wait to long.

Out of curiosity will the book or anon get special powers after anon enslaves an alicorns also will there be a special way to enslave an alicorn.

He shrugged, pointing a finger at the doorway. “Listen, slave. She’s hot, and would make a great addition to my collection.

It's really charming to see Anon grow so much more forward. He's learning a lot! <3

Starlight's early scene is fucking hot. Even in a serial like this focused on a new conquest, it's really nice that it does feel progressive and that all the past slaves aren't getting brushed aside.

LD is adorably incompetent. Thank you.

I appreciate the just raw powerful mindslavement angle here, very nice to see it just taken to a powerful corruptive extreme, and it plays out pretty different with the layers of resistance and cute corrupting mares egging her on. You're excellent at mind control and that moment of submission, thank you for bringing us so many.

And very interested in that tease for next time, the Cakes will be an exciting dynamic I feel like might require you to flex some muscles you haven't used just yet~

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If she was worried about Anon potentially sexually assaulting a pony, she could have just had a royal guard shadow Anon or had a agent like Bon Bon keep tabs on him or had him live in Canterlot where she could keep a closer eye on him. The fact that she sent a secret message to every single pony in all of Equestria and even sent a warning Sunset who lives in a different dimension.

She wouldn't go through this much trouble and take such extreme measures to ensure secrecy if it was something so simple. This implies a much deeper conspiracy.

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Logically.
Then we will continue to adhere to another theory.
What are your assumptions?

yakopak #25 · Dec 1st, 2022 · · 17 ·

Request that this all backfires for anon on the end

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Now that’d be no fun! Or would it?

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An uno reverse on anon as punishment? Basically think mares getting some kinky vengeance.

This series has become insanely popular, but I can’t help but question: what is the nature of this story? Is this porn in its most crazy and pure form? Or is it something deeper than a hypnosis trip?
I have yet to crack the code of this series’ intelligence within that captivates the audience…

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Hypno fetish demands that hot mares get hypnotized and fucked. 'Nuff said.

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The secrecy aspect of the request leads me to believe that either:

1) she fears him. There is something about him, some truth or unrealized power/potential about Anon. She could have just threatened him or thrown him in jail if she wanted, she is an absolute ruler. Her using such levels of caution implies that such levels of caution is justified.

2) she needs him to believe a certain way or have a certain perspective that will benefit her long term plans. If the efforts to isolate Anon romantically is not the goal in of itself, but rather a single step in a larger plan, then the secrecy might be justified. Perhaps she needs Anon to be sexually isolated and frustrated so that when she proposes a romantic mate for Anon. He will instantly accept without question and that will further her plans somehow.

To me the second option is the most likely. The seemingly irrational move by Celestia would make a lot more sense if it is part of a bigger plan for him and she needs him to willingly take certain actions.

Well, that's one way to close out November. :trollestia:

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The first theory looks strange for one reason: A person has no magic, and physical strength is small compared to a pony. Its only potential is the conditionally limitless possibility of intellectual development. However, in the realities of magic horses, this opportunity is available to all residents of Equestria.

The second theory looks more plausible, but then the question arises: for whom is Celestia preparing a sexually hungry beast, in front of which it will be enough to raise the tail - and he will do whatever she say? it's unlikely for herself or Luna, because they both have enough power to lie down with anyone, and if one sample is not enough, no one bothers to have an orgy with two lustful old women in the center. Chrysalis could be an option (there is even fan fiction with such a plot, but it was initiated by a purple know-it-all), but current events suggest that the Changeling Queen has already been overthrown, and therefore does not represent much value.

In any case, at the moment we have a lot of contradictory clues, which is why it is still impossible to get a complete picture of what is happening.

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There are many more reasons why a person can be feared than just magic or strength. The story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/284037/universal-acceptance
Is a great example of this. In the story Celestia is very afraid to meet the human, because she, Luna and ancient ponies were genetically engineered to be sex slaves by an ancient, powerful, magic human empire that they overthrew. Celestia is worried, because seeing another human might trigger her dormant behavioral programming to be a human's slave.

Her acting out of fear to prevent a certain outcome is still a very valid possibility.

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Be that as it may, we should continue to observe the author's thought and enjoy what is happening.

A second one. A second Pinkie Promise had been broken.

Really? Aw man, and that promise seemed ironclad too.
I guess he did lie about the only magic she was going to feel
Pack it up bois, master bullshit'o'mancer Anon is no more

SO PUMPED THIS CAME OUT SO SOON AFTER THE OTHER WOOOOOOOOOOO :pinkiecrazy:

I wonder if cadence and chrysalis with Notice the disturbance in love and lust magic they are radiating

TLF

If they are going against Pinkie Pie they better have a extremely good plan prepared, this last two enslavements were uncomfortably close to failing! Anon and his slaves better use all they got for Pinkie~

Oooh now I am very much hooked, I am very, very much looking forward to Moar. Moar MOAR! Thank you for taking the time to read my comment, this fic is very enjoyable as were all that proceeded it. :pinkiehappy:

Nice.

I'm actually really excited to see what happens next with the cakes. Will they split? Will the book allow magic to change gender? Who knows?!?

what a wonderful little herd of friends all having a great time

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By then it might be too late.

Oh sheit pinkies pissed

Mooooar i want moooooar:raritydespair:

Ok this is perfect. I'm stuck between wanting to see Pinkie Pie prevail and Anon annihilating her free will.

“ Anon .”

Oh shit, she got her sights on you, Anon

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Sunset did say that his scent was quote-unquote "alluring" so maybe there's that?

Glad someone caught that :raritywink:

My favorite part of this has to be all the enslaved group members so unashamedly interacting with each other. The fact they're so confident and obvious with it is a really nice touch, especially when they're all being controlled by the same force to do it ;D

The rising stakes for each story are also quite nice! Gives a real sense that Anon is in for even greater trouble the higher up he gets.

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