The mighty race of Giant's have existed long before Equestria impressively tall, with the strength of a dozen grown humans. Regrettably, they had gone extinct, thanks to the Griffins of old, however Nightmare Moon needed help the last Giant would do.
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Haha first, also congrats on going to college man hope you had as much fun as I did, and still learn something , โบ๏ธ
Gald Storm is alive, he's gonna be one hell of a show when he gets older.
Heheheuheha
- GL with the college thing, I'd recommend filling one of your spots with writing since you want to become a good writer. But I cannot actually tell you how hard that may or may not be. Actually let me change that, I SUGGEST, not Recommend. Cause that sounds like I know college.
No offense, but this dialogue is noticeably worse than the other chapters.
It runs on and almost blends together between characters, as if they're just mouth pieces for the author.
Not very believable, sorry.
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I mean I edited this at midnight so I'm not surprised if something was glanced over if you want to help me by pointing out what those specific points are I'll fix them now that I actually have a charged battery now.
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I see someone appreciates Celestia being a troll
Besides that, I would take writing classes but at the same time I don't know if I want that to be my main source of income I've already stated I make zero profit from story writing I don't see why I should change that.
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I'll look through it and try to give some examples soon.
Well, it looks like he is going back into slavery.
"You're going into our military wither you want to or not."
Back into the pit with you, only this time, it's the government sanctioned pit.
Monk
โThere are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.โ -Estee
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I wouldn't say that but I can see where you're coming from but it's better if the ponies have him than say the Griffin's minotaurs changelings etc
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The dialogue just seems too long for what's being said in some places.
Some characters also bleed together.
All the other chapters were great, this one just needs some polish.
Edit: at least in the equestrian army he gets to maybe get to know luna. Big maybe, though.
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Well to be fair the could offer a non military job if there were Bing nice. Like a service dog.
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I understand that but you aren't telling me where exactly it is ๐ญ If I know where it is I can fix it but other than that there's no dice.
I need to know where the problem is in order to fix it.
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Possible, but are you telling me you wouldn't want a giant that can throw Rocks like a catapult that can be moved after every throw, with relatively easy. But not just that, but can tear down front gates both wood and even metal like tissue paper? In your military.
And don't get me started if you give a Giant body armor. ๐ that's just a harbinger of death by that point.
no need to rush man take your time. as its better taking your time then rush thing
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I mean it's sort of difficult to do when college starts soon and I hardly know how to travel around campus yet.
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It did. apologies ๐
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Correct. Blunt is more of a how much potential energy, something has and how hard or fast it can be I could be wrong just woke up to make this.
i cannot fathom what that last sentence implies
Please update
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So update when?
Um hey author mind explaining the last sentence please and what the green offering symbols means like the backstory and such
Pffff
Eyebrow raised hmmm does some pony seem jealous.
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No problem I was going to cover it a later date but why not now.
It goes back to ancient times, when Giant humans or just Giants were slightly more plentiful but were deemed by modern terminology as an 'endangered species.'
So the few small towns or hamlets that knew of a Giant that was living nearby would offer something to them in hopes of protection from other stronger monsters and raiders. These offerings may include vegetables, alcohol, and sweets (if the town was rich enough. Or a wealthy pony who wanted to obtain more favor with their local Giant.)
There would be a designed zone for making these offerings along with green symbols to show the big creature that it was his or hers for the taking. So there really wasn't much interaction between Pony and Giants besides these small events and of course the mass extinction event. So these peaceful interactions would happen twice a week. Unless the town was attacked the giant never really bothered the village.
Yet if estrus was in full effect a single or several mares would let's just say 'offer' themselves, by painting themselves up in the green symbols and having a night with their local goliath.
If there giant was male, The mare's get their Heat calmed, and they satisfy a giant.
For example, the most successful of these interactions was on the island where Rockhoof was born why do you think most of if not all of those Ponies are enormous that isn't the only area where this form of cross-breeding occurred. The success rate is extremely low.
But it can indeed happen, and the descendants that came afterward do have the ability to be blessed with Giant DNA as a dominant trait, but it's always a recessive trait most of the time.
(This isn't cannon for the original MLP but I like to believe that the 'magic' that made Rockhoof stronger just switched his DNA around flipping the recessive traits with the dominant ones)
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Soon.
Man best one l have read in a super long time l been on here worth reading
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I'm glad that I have managed to create something worth a glance over ๐ฅฒ
no there not there pretty much never dealt with human if this is the same as the original work these shit have only face shit discount version of humanity missing naby trait that they should pray are giant doesn't show them