Soon her midnight magic changed blood-red in color. In her mind, Nightmare Moon searched throughout the world, looking for something big, a giant. Yet from the Zerba lands to the frozen North, nothing came up, not a pulse, nor a heartbeat, not even a breath.

Zebra

"Before It slips from memory, I am Zercora. The shaman of the Everfree, I live here away from the pony-folk of the town known as Ponyville, because they fear my look."

Zecora

This made her frown. "A creature as gentle as you should have more scars than this." The Zebra spoke her mind as she studied the scars. After some time she discovered these scars were human and pony-caused.

This sentence doesn’t make sense. Why would a gentle creature have more scars, shouldn’t it be less?

The action of pulling the Manticore's tail out made the beast release his hand from its sharp teeth and jaw muscles while it roared in pain, before he grabbed its head lifting it off the ground with one hand. True, it was kinda heavy but still holdable before he grabbed its body after tossing the tail and twisting. he manticore's head. The sound of its neck breaking was similar to a jar of pickles being opened. Then he dropped it onto the ground. For good measure he stomped the manticore's head when the sound of bones breaking along with flesh being squashed was heard.

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Might have missed something, but other than that, good chapter! Really liking the world building.

Yeah I can't see everything 😅😅 plus I make decent-sized chapters so you can't blame me for missing a few things also merry Christmas.

Also, the part where Zecora says he should have more scars is because she believed the giant had lived ever-free all his life so she expects more scars

"Now that the sun has risen, what did you want to tell me about the report?" Celestia asked before Luna took a sweet on a pillow "you may want to sit for this one dear sister."

seat

"He did what?!" Celestia, her white furred Wings flared wide in an instant. In her time had learned how to hold one mask, one void of emotions, an ideal ruler ability before she spoke one word. "Explain." Her eyes narrowed thinking the giant was going to be like a taller and physically stronger version of discord or Lord Tirek, or king Sombra, or even Grogar?"

there is an extra quotation mark here

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😂You got more 😂 be happy for your early Christmas gift!

But in all seriousness thank you for pointing out what I missed

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I'm not done! Just breathe I promise you'll get your fix 😅😅
And be patient I have to write the next chapter.

Thank you for the chapter. Merry Christmas.

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Merry Christmas

Thank you for taking your free time on the hollidays to gift us with this great chapter.

Monk
"Cooties! Of course, colts like him had cooties! Then again, she probably already caught them by now. Oh well, can't get more cooties if you already have them, right? Grabbing the colt’s hoof, she pulled herself up." -IsakeiAnon

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No problem enjoy the holidays

I am enjoying this version/take on "Human and you". Please continue :)

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I'll do my best

Don't give him a club I don't think Equestria is ready for a pony in space

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Equestrian space program 😭😭😅

(if you played Skyrim you'll know what I mean if not this video should explain it)

https://youtu.be/EWV9hSDXTkg

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I have

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I put the link their for those who didn't know what we where talking about 😅

Nice! Been a while since I've seen a your human and you story.

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Oh my bad lol

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More plz

"you will follow me won't you?" she asked more gently before trouting up to him and softly nuzzling his cheek and neck.

There were a couple errors here. "Trouting" should have been "trotting" instead and "you" should have been "You" instead along with a missed comma.

It would have been: "You will follow me, won't you?" she asked more gently before trotting up to him and softly nuzzling his cheek and neck.

I also believe that there should be something placed between gently and before as well.

Apologies if I sound like a nitpicker, but I thought you just might be interested in knowing about those errors in the chapter.

I always really enjoy reading about either Celestia or Luna, getting super excited and acting like a little kid/foal. Those two acting like that just makes me smile and chuckle a bit. 😏

"My dearest student, Twilight. I wish to inform you that all ponies from Ponyville must stay away from the ever-free forest and whitetail woods. Within those woodlands, other than timberwolves, manticores, and every wild creature that calls those woods home, an ancient beast now lives. I do not know if he is dangerous or is more peaceful like us ponies. So please stay away from the forest, until new instructions are given by me and me alone."

Looking down, Twilight saw Celestia's Ps — "I will be sending all the knowledge I have on this creature in the event he decides to attack Ponyville. You'll have every right to defend the town and ponies who dwell there. The second letter is for the mayor, if she asks why ponies are now forbidden to enter the woods for any kind of tradition or ritual."

Is she seriously sending, Six civilians to a possibly hostile if not handled correctly to confront Robert and to take it down, if for say it does something “not pony like” to take it down.

Look, celestia I know you need this taken care of, but maybe ohI don’t know maybe plan a little bit more or think it through a little bit more aka give it more thought on how you want to approach this situation and the proper response to not being led to violence or it going south.

This is why I like Luna since she is more logical and more reliable to humans in general

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It's not like she hasn't done it before in canon.

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Your not wrong

Later, on in the tale roughly a few Fortnite's later a giant pulled his head clean off. Remembering this story made Nightmare Moon shudder. She had forgotten about that. Now she was frightened to move away from him in fear he would do just that and end her plans before she even had a chance to bring an Enteral night.

did it seriously autocorrect 'fortnight' to 'Fortnite' .....I am just speechless

While I am less impressed with this chapter's quality, I am still finding it interesting.