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O Captain! My Captain!

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The annual Hearth's Warming Spectacular©️ starring the Cloudsdale Wonderbolts™️ is officially open for previews! Book your tickets now!!

Told in a series of anecdotes.

Written for Camaleao for Jinglemas 2022!!

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Camaleao #1 · Dec 30th, 2022 · · ·

Alright, this is beautiful!
I was expecting a funny story when I read the tags, but I got a rollercoaster of emotions instead: I chuckled, I felt bad for Fleetfoot, I wanted to grab Spitfire by the shoulders and tell her to chill out and give everypony a break. I chuckled some more, hoped everything would be fine and got an 'aww' moment at the end.
I think the way the story progresses with the Day's of Hearth's Warming song is really clever. Gotta love how both the setup and the characters are alligned with the canon, I can see you put quite the time and effort into this piece.