Nice work.

Nice to see Gabby getting in the mix. I ship her and Spike sometimes.

This chapter turned out pretty nice. Not only was Spike emptying his bladder, but the other girls too, and there was even some plot progression and pretty innovative depictions of sexual activity.

This is gonna be interesting!

I could do without the “water sports” honestly…

It’s just gross.

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They are all already taken by Flash, and are happily in his own harem. You should know that, since this is a spin-off to it.

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I didn’t read it so how would I know

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Apologies.

Nice,well-written story question though, since when does Spike wear clothes; and dragons have breasts? I guess that question isn't really fair tough since you can imagine anything in fantasy without it technically being wrong

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It's a fanfic, just roll with it

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Yeah I know, I meant no disrespect to your writing it really is a really good story. In retrospect that was a real stick-in-the-mud thing to say thanks for reminding me not to take everything so seriously.

Once again you've got NSFW art in the cover art source link. Please review Fimfic's NSFW images policy; what we consider NSFW overlaps pretty heavily with derpibooru's "questionable" rating, so, you can't really use that as any kind of guideline.

You can tell people the derpi image ID number in the story's description, but you cannot have clickable or complete links to NSFW images anywhere on site, including the "source" field.

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I could really use him help with that then because I'm not good with it

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I can sympathize with that to a point, but huge bare breasts isn't even slightly ambiguous. If you'd even glanced at the actual rules, you'd know that.

Also you can have the cropped version as your actual cover art, you just can't link to an NSFW source in the source field.

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Okay

Managed to read this since I wanted to get into the "flow" before trying your other fics.

Boy was this spicy
Spike x Smolder really skyrocketed to me during the recent year.

Seeing that Spike is gaining non-dragons in his harem, what if Ocellus joins in too?
Like she's disguised as a dragon to "learn" more about them and then gets banged hard by Spike

What happened to the picture?

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You tell me