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Literally, Reckless. Ponies give this sorrel mare purpose. Be kind. Be happy. Be a good pony. 🐎 1948 - 2024

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What’s a mare with a dolphin cutie mark doing out in the middle of Equestria?

Whatever the answer, Sea Swirl is one of Ponyville’s own. For all her quirks, ponies around don’t mind; they’ve seen and are stranger. And for as strange as her friends ‘Sergeant Reckless’ and ‘Screwy’ can be, Ponyville knows better.

They’re a little out of place. But it’s the right place.


Reckless is a tribute to the mare of the same name.
Cover art by the lovely 28GoodDays.

”A pairing of three characters that I wouldn't think of in a hundred years, but somehow they all fit together...”
NorrisThePony

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 46 )

Really cute stuff. A pairing of three characters that I wouldn't think of in a hundred years, but somehow they all fit together really well and compliment eachother's quirks perfectly.

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So can we expect more adorable shenanigans from these three?

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So can we expect more adorable shenanigans from these three?

Yes! Without a doubt. Updates will be more sporadic than anything else (irregular updates for an irregular story), but I’ll definitely be writing more for them.
As always, thank you for the kind words, and thank you for reading.

Well that's a thing innit? Quite lovely.

This is phenomenal! Such an unconventional trio w/ Reckless, along with an engaging set of circumstances to boot. Keep er' going.

Repostan from blog post since my tard brain can't figure things out today

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Exactly what I was aiming for; thank you, Ro.
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I appreciate the praise. Keep it up with your own Reckless fic.

Can honestly say that I never expected to see a fic with Staff Sergeant Reckless in it, looking forward to reading more.

Phenomenal update

It took Applejack a second. She shook her head back and forth, snorted, and looked at Sea Swirl with a cocktail of emotions. “Sugarcube, that’s awful.”

Exactly what'd I would expect from Apple, loving your ability to write her.

Poor mare, that's quite a story and no mistake.

An artillery mare who wasn't quite ready to retire, a fascinating character.

This is such a admirable and inspiring story. Thanks for sharing such a amazing story here. Keep sharing more stories like this one. Really appreciated. myccpay

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Thank you very much; I’m super glad to hear that. This story really is a summation of the kinds of thoughts and feelings I like to share in my stories, so to hear that level of appreciation is beyond uplifting. Thank you for reading.

“All I ask is that you talk to her a little more about her history. But not about the land she claimed to live in, because we’ve exhausted our options there. She needs help working through who she believes she is.”

It's difficult to work through your war-torn past when your psychologist refuses to believe you're actually an isekaied veteran.

No place for a soldier, especially when everypony refuses to believe your broken ponish ramblings of war. Poor girl.

A beautiful story with beautiful characters. I look forward to reading more

Really made my day to see this one update! It's nice and sweet to see all three of them making a bit of progress. It's a little, but a little bit is always something to be proud of when it's your own personal nightmares you're facing.

Head injury or toxic fumes?

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Quicksilver. Mercury poisoning.

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Yeeaaaahhh, that would do it... :applejackunsure::fluttercry:Acute rather than over time I assume?

“You’re a good mare. I really think you should know that.”

She heard a breath from below.

Sea Swirl leveraged herself forward. “And you’re a good marine. That never stopped mattering.”

This part, and the couple paragraphs that follow, were some of the most emotionally raw bits from this whole story. Excellent stuff, and marvellous visuals with Sea's story as well.

I thought Sea Swirl only want to Ponyville to visit her friend Lyra. Please respond to this comment.

It was all as he’d left it: the smoking pipe was smooth and bitter in scent; the thoroughly dried paper wad of tobacco that came with it moreso; and the matchbook and well-worn sandpaper beside them still missing three sticks.

Atch, Mac, that's a terrible thing to do to good tobacco! You've got to keep it sealed or it'll dry out completely and go all acrid. Canning jars are about ideal for the task.

Lovely scene all in all, a bit of quietly contemplative company.

so cute!!!

(p.s, sorry for your loss)

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In this story, she’s in Ponyville for different reasons altogether. I will certainly put Lyra on the list of ponies she needs to talk to, though. Thanks!

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I did actually want to have some fundamental flaws to Mac’s treatment of tobacco in order to demonstrate the knowledge gap Equestrians have on it. He really is letting it go to waste!
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Glad it’s cute!
(Thank you)

Nice moment between these characters. For how... Economical, they both are with their words, it's really sweet to see them both have such a genuine heart to heart. I'm beginning to think our trio are having just as positive an influence on the Apple Family as the Apple Family is having on them.

“Mine.”

Y'know? It works.

Comment posted by michalforgusion deleted Aug 18th, 2023

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This is an interesting start.

Interesting to read Screw Loose's background story.

The interaction between Reckless and Pinkie Pie was great.

This is not an easy job for Sea Swirl but hopefully she can help Reckless.

Sea Swirl got some good advice from Granny Smith.

Sea Swirl is making progress in reaching out to Reckless.

Sea Swirls story is interesting. I wonder how that's connected to her being in Ponyville.

I wonder how Granny Smith is going to respond to this though she'll likely simply tease her grandson lightly.

I don't really get what is going on.

Does Reckless appear in any stories with an adventure and/or dark tag?

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Not this particular take on her but you can try:
Awesome Police Do Equestria by Rob
A Reckless Mare by Tango

Well it looks like they are recovering even though Discord's actions brought back bad memories.

I am fortunate enough to be familiar when Reckless. Are the other two ones I should be familiar with?

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They’ve been around Ponyville a little bit!

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