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Her Smile: Fluttershy receives a formal invitation to the Midnight Star Celebration, and is shocked when none of her friends want to go with her. While there, Princess Luna notices Fluttershy watching the stars by herself and decides to give the shy Pegasus some company. Is Luna prepared for the information she get's when she goes asking about Fluttershy's past?
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Hooray, LunaShy!
When will chapter 2 come out?! This is great!
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Sometime in January, I'll be a little busy until than, but I'll be sure to work extra hard for you all.
DANG l have to wait until January to read more
I look forward to lunashy
But I recommend leaving the authors notes in the comments- I read the omnibus and it really helps keep the flow of a story without the notes.
I'll rate 4 for now, if I see a good ending you get a 5
tracking~!
Authors Note: For those of you have read my "All's Fair in Love and Star Dust", this is not going to be anything like that, don't fret. The stars are more or less just a mitigator for a deeper conversation that is going to take place in the next chapter. I plan on writing 3 chapters as of right now, but we'll see how that works. This is just a teaser prologue type thing I threw together, I'll write the main chunk of this (namely, the d'awww part) in January, or maybe before If I get all my stuff done.
Hope you enjoyed. (:
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Five stars.
near the end there i think it's filly, just something i noticed. i'll hold off on a rating for a bit but 4.5 from me so far.
lunashy
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I'm not to sure myself lol. Thanks for critique
this is awesome! cant wait for more
excellent start! thank you so much for taking my request!
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My pleasure. ^^
January won't be here soon enough! Thanks for breaking my pancreas... HRRGGGNNNNNN Insulin, ah needs it!
Also
You silly mares 
better have a good reason for ditchin' not only 
, but --MISSING IMAGE*-- Luna as well. Of course, if y'alls plans are to hook'em up... 
Good for y'all!
* Where are my Luna ponymoticons?
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You know, I've said the same thing. We need Luna emoticons!
(Luna is best Pony
)
87573 We also need some happy flutter emocons x-x
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Let's Protest until we get them!
Authors Note: I'm experimenting with this chapter a little bit, hope you liked it. I'm open to any and all criticism so feel free to just...let have it.
I'm planning for the next chapter to be very "d'awww" as a nice transition to a nicer, less grotesque theme than the last.
Didn't expect a new chapter so soon. Thanks :3
Props to runrun395 for the editing.
ohmygosh!
that was an absolutely amazing chapter! 5 Stars!!
Let her freshen up a bit before "WOO HOO!"
I keed, I keed.
But honestly, how do you authors do that, whenever you incorporate a song into the writing, it ends as soon as the section ends...
Soo F
ing sad...
I'm impressed, really. This community is unnaturally superior when it comes to invoking emotions in readers. This is done very well, count me as a follower!
I am not going to lie: i am almost crying. Do you have ANY idea how hard it is to get me to cry?
Five fucking stars.
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Skills
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glad to hear it.
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No, but I'm glad I was able to evoke that emotion.
MY EYES! THEY BLEED!
...
Oh, no, wait. Those are just tears...
I cried so much through this chapter be and Fluttershy have something common,our fathers were drunken slobs.
oh and our fathers are dead
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I'm so sorry to hear that
I hope your able to find comfort in this story, and the knowledge that your not alone. That scene was based (loosely) off an experience of a close friend of mine.
Aww gawd...
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that good or bad?
91958 Good... Ish... Goodish...
Well, at least I know that the night takes after Twilight.
Oh yeah, I forgot....
3...
2...
1...
THEN SHE WAS PREGNANT!
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I've been experimenting all through trying to find where my strengths lie in fic writing. 
haha
Yeah, it was no chapter 2.
Oh and MAJOR credit to Runrun395 for helping me edit this. Go to his page and read his story, it's WAY better than mine, guys.
88144 wow sorry dude for not returning your props!
don't i feel like a mule? 
anyway, great story as usual and thanks again for picking my suggestion!
I hope my editing helped!
Never would have expected Luna to be like Twilight.
I giggled. Repeatedly.
I wholeheartedly approve.
91975 nonsense man, you did way for my story than I did for yours.
91983 Aww, I'm glad you approve
where did the Fluttershy's burst of confidence come from
92023 that's a secret
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thanks, bro. The ratings say otherwise, though 
Besides, LunaShy is my favorite, so even I have to like this one better.
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magic, snort snort?
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hmmm?
92048 i get it!
lol mr. bean
YOU'RE GOING TO LOVE MEEEEE!
I like where this is going (i think)
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i am not sure, it was late at night, i dont even remember posting that so....yeah
poor Fluttershy, hope she gets Lulu before the end of the night...
i can't wait to see how this will end.
Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww/
I almost had a HHHGGGGGGGGGGGG attack.