My shipping senses tell me Luna going to be getting him first.

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If I'm not mistaken do ponies share their partners with other mares and stallions if I'm right? Don't hold me to that though I could be wrong

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Yes they do. I think they call it a herd in other stories like that but if your doing that then I see no complain.

But sometimes it’s just one pony x OC.

But hey do whatever you want.

If you want more info. I do suggest checking out the RGRE group on fimfiction.

But yeah I’m most stories they just call it a herd.

And when will he meet blueballs?

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Who's blueballs? Do you mean blueblood?

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Yeah that’s the community nickname for blueblood.

Surprised you didn’t know that or at least heard some mention of it in some other story.

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I think I heard it before I just didn't remember sorry either that I thought it was a typo

Also, that's during the gala that's when he will meet blueballs

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Ah good.

Can’t wait to see what he does to blueballs and how he reacts

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Trying to keep it somewhat close to the original storyline best I can

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Ah gotcha.

Well if you do or don’t no problem from me.

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Noted

"Sir Matthew I hereby pardon your crimes of attempted murder of my sister and Desertion from your Post. However, I will not allow you to leave the royal Palace till the end of the month to see how much of a threat you are to my little Ponies. Along with that, you have my forgiveness."

Why is it every time I see an interesting hie it's always ruined by this annoying cliche? He decides to try and kill Luna because of nightmare moon which should lead into an interesting conflict, only you have him attempt it after the fight is over and resolve it in a half assed way. He was all willing to do it without any hesitation last chapter and yet he doesn't defend himself or try to point out why from his point of view. Instead of keeping him under lockdown while having to earn both Sisters' trust and forgiveness you have them say they do, but prove their words hollow by keeping him under lock down as if they haven't. If you are going to have conflict don't do it half assed and create pointless tension. He also seemed too passive and wiling for them to invade his memories the most personal thing a person has, because that is another cliche that must happen because.... While a part of me is willing to give credit for him being ok which many fics don't even do, since it wasn't direct I will only give you half credit for it..

Also gotta have Celly easily pardoning him, because there must be conflict but fuck actually having the consequences of said actions from it actually matter or be meaningful in any way. She must quickly forgive him, though still keep him locked up anyway, essentially speaking from both sides of her ass. It's like the fic and her are trying to have it both ways.

Two-face cunt Celly: I pardon you and forgive you already for your attempted murder even though from your point of view you were just trying to kill a terrible villain and couldn't have known Luna is different from nightmare, but you are still being under lock down anyway as if you weren't, so my words are just bullshit. Sure, I could be more honest and instead not pardon you or forgive you right away making this conflict, or what is supposed to be meaningful conflict actually matter which will make my words and actions actually match, but fuck that I am just going to speak from both sides of my ass.

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Are you really going to make me rewrite a whole chapter? Because now I'm just utterly stumped with this chapter should I bin it and just remake it? Or keep it and don't stop moving?