Always and Forever! We are PonyLoid!

by Ditzy_P0N-3

Chapter Two: WHERE THE HECK AM I!?

"Ya think she'll be alright?"

"I don't know...let's wait until she wakes up."

"Oh my...she looks like she's hurt really badly."

"Well, her mane is a disgrace!"

"Rarity, is that ALL you care about?"

"WOW! A NEW PONY! I'LL THROW HER A HUGE WELCOME TO PONYVILLE WELCOME PARTY!"

Miku opened her eyes and gasped. Her body ached terribly. But when she saw the six somewhat familiar pony faces crowded around her, she screamed and tried to get up.

"Whoa, whoa, sugarcube, hold your horses.", said the orange cowgirl pony, gently holding her down with her hoof.

"WHAA- ugh- um- wait, you're horses! Horses can't talk! AHH! HELP ME!!!", yelled Miku.

"Horses? We'd rather hear you call us ponies.", said the cyan pegasus.

Suddenly, the pink curly-maned pony bounced in. "HI! MY NAME IS PINKIE PIE AND I LOVE TO THROW PARTIES AND BAKE CUPCAKES AND-"

"Pinkie, settle down!", butted in the purple unicorn. "Hi. My name is Twilight Sparkle. Are you okay?", she asked.

"M-my back hurts...", Miku groaned. The shy yellow pegasus helped Miku sit up. "Wait a minute...you all look familiar...am I dreaming?", she said. Miku looked around weakly. Her eyes widened at what she saw.

Instead of her room in the Vocaloid house, she saw a nice, quiet, cartoony town. Cute houses stood here and there, and they were all decorated with windows and doors like a doll house. Friendly-looking ponies, each with the most colorful manes, tails, and marks on their sides passed by, smiling.

Miku looked down, and almost screamed at what she saw. Instead of her human legs, body, and clothes, she now had turquoise pony legs and a body. She tried to roll over. "OUCH!", she yelped. She could barely move because of the throbbing pain everywhere.

"Hopefully, you didn't take much damage. You can't move so I'll have to teleport you.", said the purple unicorn."

"Teleport me? Isn't that impossible?", said Miku.

"It isn't if you are a unicorn, darling! And you should really consider fixing that rat's nest you call a mane!", said the white unicorn.

"Y'all should be nice to our new friend here. She got hurt pretty bad.", said the orange cowgirl pony.

Twilght bent down and began charging her horn. "Ok, everypony, get ready!"

Suddenly, they were all enveloped in light. With a flash, they dissappeared.

Comments

[Tamara Bloodhoof]

1321702Yes, gotta read now!

[Cascadejackal]

Ouch... You've made the Mane 6 absolutely two-dimensional stereotypes, the entire fic so far is shorter than most normal chapters, and it feels beyond rushed. At least your spelling and grammar are great, and that counts for something.

Take your time with the next chapter, and that should bring the quality up a little.

[glassguy]

i smell cheese, and not the good kind.

you are on thin ice. keep going

[SXCJ40]

Idea is good but the characters seem kinda one dimensional and and the story is really rushed, for what happened in this chapter, i would suggest about 1000 words

[Ditzy_P0N-3]

im sorry guys! i didn't spend too much time on this

[PlaguePaladin]

AUTO FAVORITE AND LIKE FOR HATSUNE MIKU TO BE IN THIS

[PlaguePaladin]

out on the whole thing, i excpect this though miku is my main love for music.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ guards:you may not pass!
*twilight enters to get miku through*
miku:hmmm, i guess its time for a...
twilight:hmmm?
miku:KILLING SPREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
twilight:*gasp
*miku finally kills shining armor with her hoofheld SMGs
twilight:FUCK YOUUUU!
*miku kills twilight*
miku:all done!*smiles*
*celestia enters the room and gasp*
miku:YOU MAY NOT KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!*kills celestia and other main 6 come in*
miku:I WIL KILL YOU AAALL FOR KNOWING!!!!!!!!!*kills them and flys away from castle and canterlot blows up*
miku:MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
miku:who are you?
me:lets just say i am a savior.*hours later*
miku:why didnt you kill me?
me: lets just say im, batman.*puts on glasses and explosions follow behind me and puts on glasses with a guitar tune playing*dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png

[SpyketheRAWRCat]

MOAR PLZ!!!!!!!

[Omega Infinita]

Would have been more fun if she was speaking Japanese

[FrozenStardust]

This must be continued. I'm looking forward to see how it continues. Good work so far.