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SkarinOfAtmora


You think my weapons make me dangerous? Good, keep thinking that.

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Hearts and Hooves day is ruined as all of Equestria is exposed to poison joke as part of a cruel prank. A quick trip to Zecora and the local spa should fix things up quickly. Right?

Eeeeeh not really. As Twilight and her friends soon discover that the usual poison joke cure doesn't work and that Zecora went back to Zebrica, they have no choice but to adapt to their new forms and wait for Zecora to return in, ooooooh, about 6 months? It depends on the weather really.

But wait! I hear you say. This was a prank! But who could commit such a heinous crime? Surely it was Discord! Of course not! That would be a very short story and not a fun, weird, crazy shenanigans filled slice of life tale with just a tinge of mystery!
Soooo... Whodunnit?


This story is a collaboration/comission with one of my readers.
They provided the art and I will provide the words.

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Comments ( 23 )

Welp this is gonna be plain old weird.

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That's the plan apparently :rainbowlaugh:

just as requested, here are my two cents littletoncoin.com/LCC/html/featureimages/collectors-corner/1755.50_2cent.jpg

Also, not sure if already though about it, but if not. May I suggest something that happen to Blueblood do to the poison joke?

where’s did you get that picture for your cover from?

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The artist wants to remain anonymous

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We're always open for ideas :)

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The opposite of what happen to AJ the firs time. He became a giant parade balloon, like the ones in the macy's thanksgiven parade, and has to be careful because each step he makes he bounce like he is made of rubber

"RETURN AT ONCE YOU HARLOT!"

Good luck, Luna. After all, we all know <sunglasses> that rear won't quit. </sunglasses>

leisury

leisurely

"Why would you do that?" said pony cried in agony and began scratching himself like crazy.

I should not have found that as funny as I did.

Aloe then touched the same pony on it's front long and he fell to the ground and grabbed hold of the area.

Probably leg, less probably lung.

schorching

scorching

More, please.

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what do you like about it?

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It's funny. There are some funny stories that go from joke to joke, with the bulk of the story like unto a trampoline that only exists from which the jokes occasionally spring forth. Your story isn't made of those sudden spikes of funny, it's a constant low-grade background humour. Like the movie Airplane!, there's always something funny happening. The background exists for more than setting up punchlines.
The problem with that sort of humour is that you can't just repeat a joke and say "this is a funny joke". There's much about Airplane! that I could mention, but those things aren't objectively and recognizably funny in and of themselves; they're only funny if you've seen the movie and know the full context.

Trixie seems possible. It does wreak of over the top trick. Although, she'd have to of had help.

Comment posted by SkarinOfAtmora deleted Oct 30th, 2022

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Airplane!... Haven't seen that one in years.
And you're right, I was doing the background "subconciously" and didn't even realized it had a greater purpose other than being just a background. :rainbowderp:

Thanks for your support!

Sure Luna. That rump will definitly settle on "dancing for the stallion's amunsment.".:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Love it ! Would like to see more illustrations? Or like are they forever screwed or just boned for a little bit?

Holy doubles Celestia! Shining Armor is having a case of "The weekends at Bernies!"

...or was it "Ground Hog Day" case?

On the plus side at least it only happen to those two. Can't imagine what would happen if Shining Armor now became Collosum from X-Men and it an actual living 8 foot stallion armor. Now THAT is a scary thought, specially if he screech like when metal is place against one another each time he moves.

"RETURN AT ONCE YOU HARLOT!" Luna screamed at her detached lower body, a bluish flame coming from both parts that were previously joined together. "THOU WILL NOT DANCE AT A STALLION'S CLUB FOR THEIR ENTERTAINMENT!"

Why... Just Why:rainbowlaugh:

"I'm getting worried now-WHOA!" suddenly somepony tackled him to the ground but Shining quickly realized who it was. "There you are!"

I remember looking on Reddit and seeing something about Twilight having a instinct to just tackle... Now I know where it comes from:ajsmug:

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