This story is a sequel to The Rejects
While Equestria sits on the brink of war, a band of misfits must come together to foil corrupt Canterlot elite, war criminals, and old enemies. Meanwhile, Princess Twilight Sparkle must divert her attention between a fractured Equestria and a vengeful threat beyond the sea.
*Next Chapter should be out in June!
DISCORD!?
No fucking way is GlimGlam about to get the lord of chaos on board...
Let's goooooo
Smooth moves, Trixie.
Now to wait on GlimGlam's reaction and Discord going to explode from glee because of the chaos.
Wonder when Shimmy and the Crew will meet back up with Ms. Unkillable Bastard, though.
On other news, Spike is confirmed 🦀🦀🦀GONE🦀🦀🦀, so that's good.
Finally! About time the truth came out. Right now though, the biggest question on my mind is what the heck is in that briefcase from the first work.
Absolutely loving this, you're clearly a talented writer and I can't wait to see how this all unfolds.
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Sunset will unleash the war crimes soon. I am giddy to see what she does. Although I feel her personality doesn't add up entirely, she reminds me more of Movie 1 Sunset more than "nice" Sunset, but I still love her.
Plus, Celestia above knows that having her kill Twilight would be the most beautiful irony known to man. But we all know the honor of chopping off her head is going to GlimGlam.
This is awesome
Luna is PISSED. Now, where's Sunbutt so we can have Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon set loose? At this point, God knows Twiggles has it coming.
Amazing chapter as always. You my friend are one of the best writers on this site. Thank goodness we finally returned to the briefcase plot, I was beginning to worry that had been forgotten. I was way off on its contents. I'd theorized it was some sort of legal document proving the existence of the true heir to the throne of Equestria. Looks like its some sort of weapon instead... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thank you for the very kind words!
i hope the next chapter Comes out soon i Can't wait on why Luna is acting hostile with Starlight
Rarity is dead... Lightning's crew got themselves a fine plate of shit, Trixie's after Cadance, Luna and Starlight are together, and GOD ALMIGHTY knows what Sunset, Suri and Wallflower are doing.
Rainbow and the crime gang also fucked shit sideways.
It's all further downhill from here isn't it?
D: There’s no way smolder would approve of all this
I can't tell if she means anything she's saying or is just using him for something
that's my sleepy queen
I don't know if I love how one-sided the rivalry between them is. Like at least in the last one Twilight is constantly thinking about Starlight and has regrets somewhat. I can't remember Twilight ever actually thinking about Sunset. It's fine as a motivation for Sunset, but down the line when they meet again it won't have as much impact as it could.
no.
skill issue
the consequences of 0 rizz
she's 100% correct
I thought she would be able to keep it up for way longer than that
oh we straight up skipped over the battle :(
kill bill energy
Neighsay levels of racism
...do they need the same tools that Celestia went searching for? Or are they doing their own thing
oh he dead dead
I hate her already
time for a teamup with rainbow and blondie
why do I feel like this chapter was more violent than usual lol
this guy is a problem
Great work as always!
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nice achilles reference from the movie troy lol
are we ever going to see him again?
every time someone says something like this in this story they end up betraying someone lol
she should've gone to him from the very beginning
LOOK WHOS TALKING
hoping this is elaborated on
what is his deal
neighsay would love all this anti dragon propaganda
did not expect this teamup
I'm liking her more and more in this story, but I hope she gets more of a role than just being the damsel in distress
iconic
the changelings are really not put in a good light for most of this story. like all of them are backstabbers or cowards, all except for Ocellus. Not sure I'm a fan of writing them AND the dragons both as stereotypical villainous monoliths.
this girl cannot catch a break
the dialogue is always my favorite thing about this story
I feel like this should be more of a impactful moment, but it doesn't feel much more significant than any of the times she's had to deal with other problems. Is this supposed to be the first pony she kills? I feel like that's what the purpose is here but I feel like she killed ponies before already. The tone here just doesn't feel as serious as I think it's supposed to.
whelp. Terramar is marked for death now
what is featherglass's goal here? I have a hard time believing he's making these plans just to help them out
when did this guy turn into a badass loll
ok so we've gotten all of the young six except gallus and smolder, hoping they make an appearance too at some point
jeez
I hope he's being fr because she rly needs some friends
New favorite side character
this guy needs to be killed off urgently
yesssss
nvm fuck him
SHES BACK
I was beginning to think we were never going to see her again
ok I have trouble believing Twilight would put any trust in Lavender at all. My best guess is she trusts that Lavender is self-interested enough to do it with the hopes of taking the position in the north that the other guy who joined broadwing has. But like why did Twilight just stop trying to kill her after it didn't work out the first time. She's like "oh well I guess that's it then." Kind of ooc for this story's version of Twilight imo.
this too - if she's so paranoid about everyone why doesn't she actually DO something about it? Twilight needs to be taking more of an active role instead of just being surprised when everyone around her starts turning on her.
twilight is going off the deep end.
we need more of her
barely an inconvenience
luna is a certified edgelord now
I am 99% sure that this is what's in the briefcase
guessing this is the king that luna was talking about earlier?
w h a t
holy cliffhanger. this was my favorite chapter since the gala one.
Excellent work as always, though I have trouble believing that any of the people Twilight assassinated were behind Celestia's death. It just seems so out of character. Then again, so was Twilight killing them... Would it be possible for you to create a brief recap chapter to sum up the events of the timeline so far? This story's been going on so long I've lost all track of quite of few of the characters and their roles.
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Yea I've been thinking about doing a recap at some point either in an author's note or as a comment. Not sure where the best place to put that is, but that will definitely appear somehow in the next five chapters. I totally get that with the time between chapters and the length it ends up being a lot to keep track of. I had even thought about doing an entire chapter that was literally just a prequel explaining all of the events that led up to the beginning Rejects 1, but I don't think I'll ever do that until after the main story is completely finished. But yea count on a recap of some sort showing up soon. Thanks again for your support, means a lot! <3
Great work as always!
This one was good but yeah next chapter better have a ton of wallflower's group in it because them going two chapters without an appearance is insane. Good work though update soon plz
Yeah, and she's been dicking around in Manehattan for the past 200k words.
My first thought was that Luna's words meant she was intended Twilight to be the first target of her roaring rampage of revenge.
However, I suspect that Twilight might instead be the first ally she intends to recruit against the Erased, oblivious of course to the Everything that's been going on.
Very much surprised Pharynx was the first to find out. You'd think any changeling could sense the disguise on another ling, it at least her emotions.
Generally my critiques from before continue to hold true. I still cannot develop the cognitive dissonance required to believe that this miserable setting, with these bastardous characters, also created the events of the show; that these craven murderers didn't take a sledgehammer to the petrified Legion of Doom at the first opportunity and mix their fragments in with the cement foundation for Canterlot's newest orphan-juicing facility.
But I do not want to repeat myself too much. Rather, I'd like to talk about tone.
I will happily admit that we're getting deeper into the realm of my personal opinion. Still, I should hope it is not my opinion alone.
I wish to stress: I was not forcing myself to read this. My fatigue does not come from unenjoyment or lack of stamina.
Still, even though I couldn't pull myself away, this was an exhausting read.
"It's going to get worse before it gets worse" is the prevailing tone.
The misery and malice in everything is suffocating. Every good thing that happens is a bad thing in disguise. Of all the kind strangers that shelter our heroes, half intended to betray them from the start, half simply wish to exploit them until a better offer falls into their lap, and a third half get iced before we even get to know them. Nopony gets any time to lick their wounds or come to admire each other. There's an attempted rape every other chapter, and an abusive family behind every other mare. Ponies have been socked in the jaw for speaking or not speaking more times than I can count.
I have noted before that by all appearances, this Equestria you've made has always been a terrible place -- that it'll require more than just dethroning Twilight to make it live up to her teachings.
But at this point, I don't care enough about this Equestria anymore to be invested in seeing it saved. Now I kinda wanna see Twilight finally give up and burn it down herself, just to spite this super-intimidating threat from overseas.
Like. Buck it. It was good when she murdered those guys actually. Not because she was right to do so, but because statistically, if you were to put a random named character to death, you'd probably take down an unrepentant murderer with a body count in the double digits.
This ubiquitous oppressiveness may well be intentional, but I cannot recommend it. Without any spots of brightness and happiness to contrast the constant darkness, you paint the kind of picture I can get by turning my monitor off, and the story becomes unfortunately only moderately more engaging than doing so.
When you brought out the Surgeon, there was no shock. All I could think was, "Yeah, that tracks."
I'll track this for the sake of the next update, but I cannot promise that I will read it as soon as it comes out.