Heyooo. I accidentally another chapter. And almost the third chapter too. Will post it later when I proof it and clean it up.
This second chapter is very light-hearted, but foreshadows a lot of what's going to happen in the next chapter. Oh and be warned, chapter three will once again be some of my more trademark evil stuff, so enjoy it while it lasts.
Oh and Hells Bells! If you are gonna thumb up or favorite, leave a comment. Heck, even if you thumb down, leave one. Especially the people who keep favoriting this. Did you know that every time you do that, I get a message with your name on it! If you don't start commenting, I'll post a massive list of all the weird foalcons who secretly like this stuff!
I like this story. The psychology behind punishment is a very interesting thing that you don't see explored very often. The great thing is everyone can relate to it, I remember going to the corner when I was little. The corner sucked.
It's an interesting twist, because usually it's the top who is more mature, and knowledgeable about where this is heading - seeing as Scoots knew why she was wet, and Sweetie didn't, unless Sweetie has done a lot of "research" without Rarity finding out, maybe after she woke up from that dream?
Also - I've gotten into the habit of favoriting stories before I read them in order to make myself read them sooner rather than later - given that my read later queue is now over 1350 stories.
And yeah, Scootaloo is usually the dominant one in the series, and Sweetie sometimes feels like a wall-flower. But as some people who are more into BDSM know, the more dominant you might seem, the more submissive you want to be . And chap three might answer more questions, which you don't even know you wanted to ask yet.
I love how this chapter started out. VERY much what I would expect from the CMC. Damn... I miss being able to play like that. lol Cant be kids forever... we all have to grow up sometime.
Now, get Chapter 3 posted... NAO! Talk about teasing us, building up like that, then just ending the chapter.
1333208 What would you say if I told you that I already wrote chapter three yesterday? And It's all finished? And all I have to do is push one button and it's posted?
And I won't do it. You know why? That's the whole point. :p
so the story is good i think a little more..."scootaloo didnt know why she felt so good even in pain"...or that sort of thing but its late to ask you to change the already writed chapters...so...moving on XD
Heyooo. I accidentally another chapter. And almost the third chapter too. Will post it later when I proof it and clean it up.
This second chapter is very light-hearted, but foreshadows a lot of what's going to happen in the next chapter. Oh and be warned, chapter three will once again be some of my more trademark evil stuff, so enjoy it while it lasts.
Oh and Hells Bells! If you are gonna thumb up or favorite, leave a comment. Heck, even if you thumb down, leave one. Especially the people who keep favoriting this. Did you know that every time you do that, I get a message with your name on it! If you don't start commenting, I'll post a massive list of all the weird foalcons who secretly like this stuff!
yay, is there gonna be some bondage stuff coming up in the next chapter(s)????
keep up the good work
1331623 erm... did you read chapter two?
I like this story. The psychology behind punishment is a very interesting thing that you don't see explored very often. The great thing is everyone can relate to it, I remember going to the corner when I was little. The corner sucked.
It's an interesting twist, because usually it's the top who is more mature, and knowledgeable about where this is heading - seeing as Scoots knew why she was wet, and Sweetie didn't, unless Sweetie has done a lot of "research" without Rarity finding out, maybe after she woke up from that dream?
Also - I've gotten into the habit of favoriting stories before I read them in order to make myself read them sooner rather than later - given that my read later queue is now over 1350 stories.
1332034 Ouch. That's a looooong list to go.
And yeah, Scootaloo is usually the dominant one in the series, and Sweetie sometimes feels like a wall-flower. But as some people who are more into BDSM know, the more dominant you might seem, the more submissive you want to be . And chap three might answer more questions, which you don't even know you wanted to ask yet.
I love how this chapter started out. VERY much what I would expect from the CMC. Damn... I miss being able to play like that. lol Cant be kids forever... we all have to grow up sometime.
Now, get Chapter 3 posted... NAO! Talk about teasing us, building up like that, then just ending the chapter.
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Pretty good so far. :) Nothing like what I've read before. Will be looking out for the next chapter! :D
1333208 What would you say if I told you that I already wrote chapter three yesterday? And It's all finished? And all I have to do is push one button and it's posted?
And I won't do it. You know why? That's the whole point. :p
1335973Your EVIL!!! EVIL I TELL YA! lol
1336043 It's spelled "you're", you numbnut. Just shut up and read the next chapter.
Ok ok im gonna comment XD
so the story is good i think a little more..."scootaloo didnt know why she felt so good even in pain"...or that sort of thing but its late to ask you to change the already writed chapters...so...moving on XD
Hmm. A tight chapter eh.
Mmmm... go on...
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