Octavia's having a bad day. She keeps having bad days. She keeps failing at everyday skills that normal ponies don't have to worry about; She keeps failing at existing around other ponies. She can never exist right around them. She can't smile right around them... She can't make chitchat the right way... She can't open up. Something must be so wrong with her. She must be some kind of monster.
Her wife, Vinyl, begs to differ. And she tries her hoof at easing the pain with a pretty outlandish idea.
Chapters (2)
WOW. that (for me at least) is a new way of looking at that particular topic
I love this story
Aww, so sweet! I like how your Vinyl/Octy dynamic is similar to the one I'm writing.
I love how Octy lampshades the whole thing even while she's enjoying it.
(Oh hey, I commented on the first chapter and now I find out there's an epilogue!)
I like how you explored just how debilitated Octy is in the first chapter, and now you even acknowledge the limits of what Vinyl knows how to do in the epilogue. That brings reality to the story. Thank you.