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Sunny, Izzy, Hitch, Zipp, and Pipp found the Locket of Souls and it called the spirits of the Mane 6, Starlight Glimmer, the Young Six, and the Pillars. But trouble arises, when an old foe has returned to reign destruction upon the world. The Main 5 will have to team up with the veterans if they wish to save their world.
The past will be revealed.
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Wow this is pretty interesting and it really escalates so quickly but interesting so it looks like sunny and her friends are gathering up the seashells for Izzy but then they found a locket but when they open it apparently the three generations of elements of harmonies Spirits just came out the pillars the main six and the young six now I am pretty interested how this will go
Oh you also get any idea from the comics nice
Wow this is certainly to introduce to the old generation to the new generation and a very nice way to introduce everybody to each other and sunny and the others explain about what Discord is doing and apparently something is not right and like Pinkie Pie says it's going to get messy I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time
OK. It is not easy starting out as a fanfic writer, so I can be forgiving if the faults this story has so far.
Really, the plot seems interesting, it’s just that it feels like things are going too fast and the dialogue feels………Exponsitiony. I can’t really give advice other than keep writing and your style will come to you.
Short chapter I don't mind, but the chapter moved a bit to fast
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Thanks for the support. Comment any suggestions if you want.
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Thanks for the constructive comment, I did say this is my time writing.
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Thanks for that. I'll happily accept some help.
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I did read them and they are very interesting. Wonder what will happen next?
Wow this was probably something else so it looks like all the generation had to stop Tenebris and apparently all three of them know what he did and whatever he did this is much bad that we can imagine and it looks like Sunny is trying to stop him but I wonder what's going to happen guess we'll find out next time
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Backstory:
The Mane 7, Pillars, and the Young 6 knows that he did terrible things. Applejack, Rainbow, and Rarity still hold grudge after what he did to Granny, Spitfire, and Coco respectively. Can't say more. Thanks for the support
Read all three chapters, and I'm liking what I'm seeing.
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Thank you
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This is rushed but I'll go easy
her name was said twice
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Oh plz don't be too hard on him, he just suffered from all the loneliness and wasn't thinking straight
They are not surprised?
saddened?
Angry?
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He did it with 'somewhat' good intentions
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This is pretty good, I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Thanks
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Not yet finished but thanks for the rating
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Fixed
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I know, but they didn't realize it yet
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Some are surprised (See Applejack's comment, "I can't believe that happened.") while others are saddened like Twilight that their legacy didn't last and others just impressed (See Rarity's comment "I must say, you did all of that fabulously") As for angry, I don't think they are, yet.
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Like I said, They don't know it yet.
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You're welcome
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dissapointed?
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Some ponies I'll leave to other interpretations
There's a y on that sentence
The only question is what kind of magic that put the souls inside of a lock it how in the world did they get themself inside
It looks like Tenebros summon the legions of Doom including two other villains that were killed this is like Mortal Kombat 11
Well it looks like sunny was woken up but right now the others have to get back home now they have to figure out how to stop Tenebros but apparently they need a weapon to stop him and Twilight is still freaking out about this whole thing but luckily nobody would not be alone they just have to work together as a team but speaking of Team it looks like Tenebros got his own team as well I'm surprised the shadow a pony is not there but something tells me this won't be easy for Our Heroes to stop these guys well we'll find out next time
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They were summoned from the Afterlife.
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Actually the shadowy pony is King Sombra
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fixed
it was actually supposed to be the word "by"
I get it lol
Wait a minute what is she doing here
Before you ask, yes, this conversation between Applejack and Sprout is inspired by, Legends Never Die, Honest Sprouts, I suggest you read it, It's great.
Yeah I read that story it's pretty good and actually a kind of makes sense to be honest with you
So it looks like Twilight explain to Sunny about the situation including Starlight meanwhile downstairs the others were basically just talking to each other until Sprout showed up and somehow Applejack can feel something about him then again the other main six also have a connection with the New Generation as well but apparently something is going down at the cantalogic and the Mysterious Pony was making a run for it but apparently that mysterious Pony is Sunset Shimmer what is she doing here and I wonder what the pillars and the young six are doing I'm sure the ponies and the new generation are pretty shocked to see different creatures as well but anyway can't wait to see how this will go although you should have stygian to join in
"Pipp seems to have my Spirit, too"
Ocellus
Okay so this is an interesting one here so it looks like the others finally are here including with sunsets so now they have to get to the area where the weapons are and it looks like Sprouts it's going to join along with it but he needs to prove himself to the elements of honesty especially with the element with rockhoof and yona and hearing the other spirits of the Apple family are here given Sprout the questions and everything and so far so good until Chrysalis showed up and now things are going to get more crazy I wonder how this will work out guess we'll find out next time
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In a dark castle throne room, a tall mare who is an alicorn with a long, slightly curved horn that is colored paler towards the tip. She is deep purple with dark blue eyes and glittery blue eyeshadow. Her mane is white with light streaks of cyan, and is parted into two side sections with thin braids wrapped around her ears, looking at the screen showing the ponies fighting the villians.
"Hmm, this should be interesting.” She said to herself and to her unicorn friend next to her throne, watching the scenes.
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What???? (Just confused)
Are there any ships? just asking
Ok well this is certainly a pretty epic battle a little short but pretty good Queen Chrysalis still wants revenge on Starlight after what happened back in season 6 finale but luckily With a Little Help from her friends she finally stopped her but she's not dead she's just teleport back where she come from so now what they're going to do guess we'll find out next time
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Of course, the is as follows:
Applejack x Rainbow
Apple Bloom x Tender Taps
and others soon