Twilight is transported to Soviet Russia. How will this tale end for the most magically gifted of unicorns?
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Amusing concept, made me giggle a bit.
Thumbs up.
In Soviet Russia, story favorites YOU!
Short, silly story?
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As a Finn, I find this extremely hilarious. Laughing at Russians, is there anything better? (Laughing at Swedes doesn't count).
And the MvM (and TF2) reference sealed the deal.
Great job, dearest author!
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NOW IS COWARD KILLING TIME!!!
I HEAR SOMEPONY BUILDING DIAPER CHANGING STATION!!!
YATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATA!!!
POW!!! YOU DEAD! NOT BIG SURPRISE!!!
P.S.: Ah yes, ushankas. The russian fur hats that almost all gradpas own in former socialist countries. I have dismissed that claim.
Today I am going through the first chapters of every non-mature story on the front page and offering feedback on each one. Yours is the fourth.
Presentation
* There's no need to keep cycling through things to call Spike—purple assistant, baby dragon, etc—just call him Spike. Giving him all these other names gets very confusing very fast, and you'll find that most published literature doesn't do that sort of thing very often at all.
* Look up how to punctuate dialog. You're doing it wrong about half the time.
should be
* Italics are classier than ALL-CAPS.
Story
* Another one joke fic, also with an unoriginal joke. This fic did not offend me to the core, but it did not make me laugh either, because I have heard Russian Reversal jokes before.
Good day.
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Thank you kindly for your feedback, sir! It will help me a lot.
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Thanks!
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Ahahaha. Never seen those before.
В чем прикол? Хрень, зря время потратил
*evil soviet comment*
THIS IS SO RIDICULOUS
made me laugh.
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I too understand. Having family in Finland, I've learned these things. Finnish Brohoof?
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(\ You got it!
In soviet russia, fanfic reads you
As a proud Russian, THIS IS HILARIOUS!!!
1308463 Killing you is full time job
In Soviet Russia you kill German!
In Soviet Russia, You unmark Starlight Glimmer
Читал оригинал, cool fanfic.
In Soviet Russia, tree bucks you!!!
Do I have to pick only one part that I liked? If so, how broad can it be?
In Soviet Russia, fictional couple ships you
In Soviet Russia, Pony ride YOU!
Россия - священная наша держава,
Россия - любимая наша страна.
Могучая воля, великая слава -
Твое достоянье на все времена!
Славься, Отечество наше свободное,
Братских народов союз вековой,
Предками данная мудрость народная!
Славься, страна! Мы гордимся тобой!
От южных морей до полярного края
Раскинулись наши леса и поля.
Одна ты на свете! Одна ты такая -
Хранимая Богом родная земля!
Славься, Отечество наше свободное,
Братских народов союз вековой,
Предками данная мудрость народная!
Славься, страна! Мы гордимся тобой!
Широкий простор для мечты и для жизни
Грядущие нам открывают года.
Нам силу дает наша верность Отчизне.
Так было, так есть и так будет всегда!
Славься, Отечество наше свободное,
Братских народов союз вековой,
Предками данная мудрость народная!
Славься, страна! Мы гордимся тобой!
My favorite of these kind of jokes:
In Soviet Russia, you rob bank.
In capitalist america, Bank rob YOU!