Some reading but mostly putting a lot in Read It Later
What dwells on Cozy Glow's mind after she becomes a stone statue?
This is my first published fanfiction ever. I'm someone who is interested in writing but never got around to much practice. So, this was mostly just practice for me with the goal of trying to reach at least 1,000 words. I don't expect this to be any good, this is for now just a one shot. I welcome constructive criticism.
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Very nice. I always felt this would be terrifying for a child. Plus, it kinda feels wrong for a forgiving Nation like equestria to do that to a child
Good story. Really feel bad for Cozy though. She did not deserve that.
Do you only creature that really knew they were petrified was discord and that’s just because well he’s discord. But yes simply being petrified is kind of terrifying it’s like a death but never ending.
Awesome story for your first one! MAN, poor Cozy; she doesn't even get the other two for company! O_O
Typos I caught: "It’s so bizarre really. Like something that shouldn’t even be possible and all kinds of things have happened in Equestria.
Twilight and all her friends were probably celebrating their victory. Enjoy it while it lasts.
Enjoy your time together for now, but you’ll lose. I’ll rise up again and take you down!
Dang it! I still have an idea of what to do. The noise died down, I guess they left."
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I didn’t consider that possibility, although it’s never specified if that is the case.
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Thanks for finding typos, I’ll fix them when I can
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You're welcome! :)
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My only other proof I have that you aren’t conscious when you’re petrified is when twilight was and she came out of it very confused as if she hadn’t been aware the entire time.
The story looks OK for a story that doesn’t have any dialogue that’s pretty tricky to do
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Oh yeah there was that. Although that was from a cockatrice, it might be different. Thanks for the compliment.
Great story! Feel bad for Cozy. Can you try do one for Tirek and Chrysalis?
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I don't know how good I am at their characterization, but I guess it depends on how confident I feel
hugs statue
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Discord
Id kill you right now if i see you bring this up
You ruined a filly's life