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Horse-With-No-Name

Horse-With-No-Name #1 · Aug 25th, 2022 · 10 · 3 · Spitfire ·

One more chapter and an epilogue by Friday.

Slipstream95

Slipstream95 #2 · Aug 25th, 2022 · 3 · · Spitfire ·

I like this, I want more.

Silent Wing

Silent Wing #3 · Aug 25th, 2022 · 1 · · Spitfire ·

Amazing. Goood luck for the contest.

Horse-With-No-Name

Horse-With-No-Name #4 · Aug 25th, 2022 · · · Spitfire ·

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Thanks! I might need it: the competition looks fierce.

Silent Wing

Silent Wing #5 · Aug 26th, 2022 · 2 · · Rainbow Dash ·

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It is, only question i if I get my story done in time. I still have trouble writting and clop isn't easy. Especcially with a 4K minimum word count....

Horse-With-No-Name

Horse-With-No-Name #6 · Aug 26th, 2022 · 1 · · Rainbow Dash ·

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I know what you mean: it can be hard not to get... distracted let's say.

Silent Wing

Silent Wing #7 · Aug 26th, 2022 · 1 · · Rainbow Dash ·

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Yeah, that exactly is my poblem, especially with the amount of games I play. Best exmple, t the moment I m busy with the Puerto Rico event in World of Warships.

Horse-With-No-Name

Horse-With-No-Name #8 · Aug 26th, 2022 · 2 · · Rainbow Dash ·

11343016
Sure let's go with that lol
Enjoy it while you can: eventually life gets too busy for that stuff, in my experience.
But hey if you like games enough, you'll make time for them I suppose.

Slipstream95

Slipstream95 #9 · Aug 26th, 2022 · 7 · · Derpy ·

Hell yes I want a sequel!

Horse-With-No-Name

Horse-With-No-Name #10 · Aug 26th, 2022 · · · Derpy ·

Duly noted! Looks like plenty of others agree.

Feel free to spread word around the interwebs wherever likeminded people lurk.

mediocrewriter

mediocrewriter #11 · Aug 27th, 2022 · 1 · · Derpy ·

I just love how you give the details
holy shit

Horse-With-No-Name

Horse-With-No-Name #12 · Aug 27th, 2022 · 1 · · Derpy ·

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Thanks! Sometimes it's tricky to communicate what characters are thinking with their actions, especially to the level of detail I want, but sometimes I feel like I go too heavy with their internal monologues. It's good to see there's a demand for that. Postmodern and Ebonyglow also do an excellent job with similar styles.

Silent Wing

Silent Wing #13 · Aug 27th, 2022 · 1 · · Derpy ·

What would you want to save them from in the first plac? As I see it right now, it already has a happy ending. Of course you could always turn Celetia and Luna into anal addictate mares by introducing them to this deligtfull plant.

Horse-With-No-Name

Horse-With-No-Name #14 · Aug 27th, 2022 · 1 · · Derpy ·

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If everyone just had sex all the time, we'd starve and go extinct pretty fast. The first half of it sounds fun though, sure. Just assuming the same is true in Equestria.

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