Sunset is taken by Yautjas and trained like a Predator.
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Trixie didn't really fight back at all I think that was more of a dishonorable kill
That… was… AWESOME!!!
I did not expect this, I didn't really think Trixie deserved this, especially with how you opened up with her feeling bad about what she'd done and honestly I would have liked it better if Sunset had stopped short of outright killing her and just scared her to teach her a lesson.
Having said that though it's your story and whatever direction you want to take is yours to do so.
The chapter was over all well written and while this story is going in a different direction then what I was hoping it is overall an interesting one and I wish you luck writing it
Maybe she is willing become a bad blood or something that a clan has their own honor code if they integrated someone not one of them into their clan and life style.
Maybe just guest working here, if the Author of this story has a hit list on who lives and who marked for death then I can understand that, maybe she is willing to send a message if they can't handle something like this from happening then what is the point of being the elements of harmony for her former friends, like I said for me it is guess work.
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As much as I dislike the Equestria Girls Trixie ( Before that forgotten memory thing. ), and especially in the Anon-A-Miss stories.
Those two have a point. Especially about the Honor Code. Because Trixie didn't fight back and all.
Unless you made a "exception"?
I have mixed feelings about this chapter.
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Trixie attacked her during Anon-A-Miss. This was simply karma.
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What about the honor code on NOT attacking the defenseless? Trixie clearly was highly defenseless.
Plus, what is the point of making Trixie feel bad, and full of guilt. Only for it going nowhere, and just get her killed? luckyboys121 also talked about this.
It makes so much better if it was Gilda or Lightning Dust? They are better targets, and I won't feel a hint of remorse for them.
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Like I said, Trixie attacked Sunset because she at first thought she was Anon-A-Miss.
This was simply revenge.
This is a MESSED UP chapter. Why kill Trixie? She is DEFENSELESS! Not to mention that she's already feeling REMORSE for her actions. And don't tell me it's for revenge. By killing someone, you are no better than those who have wronged you. And I highly doubt Sunset is upholding the Yautja's Honour Code by murdering someone out of spite.
I have some ideas you mite like for future chapter.
1 sunset falls in love with one her hunts brothers.
2 on one hunt sunset becomes very sick and one's her hunt's bothers check her over thay find out that she is with child.
3 sunset visits plant liquor or better know as Earth 2 .
4 sunset meet a native American named Nara and thay team up to hunt down a feral predator
A very exalant chapter but that was dishonourable kill Trixie did not fiat back
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Naru was in the past. Prey was set in 1719.
This is modern era for Sunset. Around 2013-2014.
And hell nah! No incest!
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Sunset kills Gilda, Lightning Dust, Dumbbell, Hoops, Score and Rainbow Dash next chapter.
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Can i give a suggestion, how about insted of sunset why not a badblood or a small group of two or three the bad blood, maybe the one that sunset killed could be part of the group and he was only a scout or gone rough from the group.
With that sunset can aid with the Enforcer ranks or become one to hunt down the group on earth that are still in hidden and the people that you marked to be kill like trixi had a unfortunate run in with this bad blood and mybe the other are targeted by them.
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Hmm...
I'll think about it.
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Or right how about this sunset meets nares descendant.
And sunset falls in love with yocher from a different trip.
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Sunset dates Flash in this story.
And yeah, she'll meet her descendant.
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Do sunset and flash have a child together and does flash meet her hunt brothers
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Flash, turns out, has part Yautja blood in his DNA. His mother is Yautja and his father is human. Sunset's father is Yautja and her mother is a pony who originally came from the EQG world.
Flash's father had a run-in with a Yautja many years ago and taught Flash to hunt them.
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I love that idea and plot.
And will sunset teach her child the hunter way's
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You like to keep giving out spoilers for your stories?
she could have given Trixie a chance to fight back
from here: https://avp.fandom.com/wiki/Yautja_Honor_Code
Equalize the odds: Killing prey when using less equipment is considered a greater prize, and hunters should typically give their prey a fighting chance for honor's sake. If the prey demands close-combat, the hunter is to fight to their prey's standards, and should minimize use of their Plasmacaster or other projectile weapons.
however I also found this rule
Never harm the innocent: Those who have done no harm should have no harm done to them. (It can be inferred that this rule must pertain only to harming other Yautja in their society since they hunt and kill members of many species one could call "innocent". It can also be inferred that Bad Blood Predators would ignore this rule either in part or in whole.)
Trixie wasn't innocent so I suppose that counts, you did mention she sent in secrets and had the gall to blame Sunset and even attacked her
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Trixie would tell everyone what she'd seen and what Sunset did to her.
It would give too much away. Plus. if Trixie told her parents, that would lead to them telling police, who would take it to the goverment/US Military.
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Oh I got you on that one. Innocent in the context of the code means you haven't killed anyone The only two exceptions are when you need to keep the race secret or when you get put on a extermination the Mission like in the movie alien versus predator Requiem.
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I personally enjoy the story, but there is no one in starlights entire school that can be considered worthy prey. On top of all of that, Trixie was totally defenseless sea hat, no weapons starlight not only have her armor her staff, those blades that can cut anything in half, but the peace of the resistance a laser blaster. personally I think Trixie was an AK-47 and 30 ft . Sunset with no armor and no weapons. Would have still beat Trixie in that circumstance. The rule where she needs to keep the alien race secret makes no sense here. Even if Trixie will have gotten away and told her parents who would believe her. And even if we were going to use the logic you are trying to use sunset came into the school with advance armor and arm cannon which he used to dread them the whole school not be hard to figure out that the girl who came in with all attentional purposes with a gun is not executing people who wronged her. So hopefully I can make a small prediction and say he's going through attempt to kill the CMC. The people who wronged her the most but doing that would make her a bad blood.
like a ninja
meaning Trixie above. This probably has something to do with the Annon-A-Miss comic I didn't read nor intend to, but my guess is Trixie did something offensive in that story.
Yep. Figured something along this regard.
It was at this point that Trixie realized Sunset has one badass costume for Nightmare Night. Rock on, Girl!
"I was innocent of the crimes imposed by Annon-A-Miss," Sunset replies. "However, I am guilty of what I'm about to do to you."
Keep running into this problem about threatenign to break The Code. Trixie is too weak to warrent this action, regardless of how upset Sunset is.
Huh? I tottally disagree here. Trixie is a weakling undeserving of bringing any true might upon her. Her "attacks" are more like the frightened wails of a terrified child. This WILL be a dishonorable kill.
Yeah. this is why I avoided the Annon-A-Miss story except I suspect this is significantly worse.
And criminal.
...
Okay then.
... of her crimes."
After all, that was such a challenge.
-500 exp penalty.
Calls it as I see it. She is officially a dishonorable murderer now and petty to boot for way overreacting. I bet her previous antagonists went nowhere near this far.