Sunset is taken by Yautjas and trained like a Predator.
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Did I already ask what a Bad Blood Predator is?
its nice to be open. it helps clear the air a bit.
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you did in chapter 3, Yautja Prime
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One, ouch. Two, rude. All Sunset was doing here was telling her family her backstory a little bit.
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Draph, what do you think of this chapter, dude?
What's next for Sunset then? I mean, Canterlot High is permanently destroyed, and I doubt she wants to see the Rainbooms, CMC, or any hypocritical students that survived the Xenomorphs ever again.
And I don't see a reason for her to go back to Equestria either?
What about the Dazzlings? Maybe?
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She might go and see The Dazzlings on Earth. She might go and hunt down some Bad Bloods, or go hunt the Waovu Nyas'i A.K.A the Gnarly Moose.
What did you think of Dutch and Lex appearing?
She might become an elite huntress like Wolf. Also, did you dislike my new story by any chance?
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Dutch and Lex are fine. Although, I find it a little weird that Dutch of all people is with Yautja? Considering one of them killed his team, and almost killed him too.
And your new story with the son of one of the Dazzlings is fine.
Although, reading your many Anon-A-Miss stories ( Along with them and the many other authors. )
It does give me a brand new idea that will be my take on either the Anon-A-Miss storyline, or the entire Equestria Girls setting in general. And it involves on what if the International Contract Agency ( ICA ) or even Providence notices the "magic incidents" happening, that might jeopardize the "status quo" of the world. So, they decided to "investigate" by sending their number one hitman/silent assassin.
And I might show on where the Human Sunset actually is? Or what if the Pony Sunset ISN'T really the "original" one we know? Because the beginning will set before, during, and after Hitman: Absolution for a reason. Because that sets in 2013 if I remember correctly.
Then after that, is the regular Equestria Girls stuff, and then the modern Hitman Trilogy ( Hitman 1, Hitman II, Hitman III. ).
P.S. I did once have one good idea with Sunset joining Rainbow Six Siege after leaving Canterlot High for good. I just didn't publish that, or anything else I have in my head yet.
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Enforcer isn't in their clan. It consists of Tua'Ja, Yuh'ra, T'Ogah, Yeyinde, Scar, Celtic, Chopper, Guan-Thwei and Sunset.
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Forgot about "enforcer". I actually meant Dutch. My stupid tablet has this dumb "spelling" system.
Read it again.
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Dutch was on Yautja Prime due to being seen as highly honorable, never compromising his morals or his humanity. He was taken to help train the young bloods and unblooded.
He can go back to Earth if he wishes to, same as Lex and Sunset. Though, Dutch would be considered a threat to humanity as would Sunset.
Dutch and Sunny have a father-daughter dynamic. Sort of. She looks up to him as another father figure, having never felt fatherly love.
When it comes down to Dutch sacrificing his life to save Sunset and the others in her clan from dying at the hands of Xenomorphs Sunset will grieve him deeply and will practically go radio silent for days due to the grief.
She'd feel the same if her adoptive family, or any of them, died.
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I understand with Sunset, but Dutch?
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Having been in combat with them, in the jungle remember? Plus, he has military experience. He could've passed on military training tips and ideas to the Yautja. The military and government would be after him to kill him or capture him. Same for Sunset.
The risk of returning to Earth at all is extremely high.
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Yeah, that's definitely not gonna to happen.
Edit: Not with Sunset and Dutch, and their friends/family will say about it.
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What do you mean, not gonna happen?
The US military would grasp onto any leads regarding Yautja, Dutch or Sunset if they go back to Earth. They could be captured and interrogated.
They're gonna hunt on earth-like planets to get food and resources. Other planets to hunt animals to gain fur pelts to sleep with. And to also get more trophies.
I really like the story.
There are numerous elements that ruin emersion for me because it just feels ridiculous. Dutch being here is one of them. This is a Vietnam veteran living with the very same race that brutally murdered, MURDERED, his comrades. I'm sorry, but it's highly unrealistic he'll get over that to this degree. The Yautja race have their own standards about honorable kills, but Dutch shouldn't share it and therefore shouldn't be all buddy-buddy with this race either, but whatever, man.
The original Prditor movie might have been an action movie to the viewer, but it was a horror movie to the characters living within it. Horror is traumatizing when you actually live through such moments, not to mention survivor's guilt. This is a clear example of someone who should have severe PTSD.
All that aside, since immersion is ruined anyway, seeing him in this story is kind of neat. For what it's worth, it sort of complements the franchise as well, because this character is part of it too.
But hey! While you're at it, why not throw in Allen Riply for good measure? She should be in the future and therefore putting her here would be a severe continuity error, but screw it! You got the Alien franchise in this too so why not complete this whole shebang? It'll be fun anyway.
The only realistic reaction I can immediately visualize for Dutch here is just to stare at Sunset in silence for a few seconds, privately decide she's crazy, then give her a fake and slightly condescending smile and say, "Alright," thereby pretending he believes her.
Please tell me they were ponified while there!
It strikes me as odd that she's telling all of this to a stranger she just met. In this world, most likely, she didn't see The Predator movie, nor does she regard this as Arnold Schwarzenegger. Rather than that, she sees Dutch just as an old soldier. Because of that, this seems ... strange.
Oh, we're going to skip this backstory?
I know this isn't his story, but it might have been interesting. Unrealistic, but probably still interesting.
Yet another flaw with him being here means he can't be with his friends/family back on earth. He also called them ugly motherfuckers. I guess he got over that too. True enough. After this long, he would be used to it. That much I do believe.