I am a Star Wars fan and I like Human in Equestria stories as well as Spike Harem stories
With Cybertron a barren wasteland, the Autobots and Decepticons stumble upon the planet Earth in search of resources. The evil Decepticons hope to seize control of Earth and its energy supply in the hopes of conquering the galaxy, while the Autobots fight to protect the Earth with the help of Spike Witwicky and his friends, the Rainbooms.
Contains plot elements from Transformers G1, Prime, and the live-action movies.
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i love Transformers
So, Twilight the smart one of the group not only suggest they check something strange out, instead if reporting it to the authorities, but also suggests to enter the ship despite the potential danger? I guess to her and the others common sense is overrated. I get they have to meet up with the autobots because plot, but there is a smarter and not brain dead way to have that happen. Yeah, not a good first impression and I am not going to keep reading. Good luck, but I don't like stories where characters, that should know better mind you, make braindead decisions just because plot.
Will this story have jokes about people confusing Spike the Dog's name with Spike Witwicky's name?
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If they told anyone what they saw right away, others would think they were crazy.
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They didn't know it was a ship at first, so all they would say is something crashed landed at the mountainside nearby and the authorities thinking it to be a meteor or something will investigate it. So, no, point disproven and even if it's valid that doesn't justify them putting themselves in danger like morons.
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I mean what they’ve seen close up. Besides, while they were inside the ship, the Autobots were doing recon. The ship was empty.
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Which they didn't know, so from their prospective they decided to just jump right into a ship, that for all they know could contain danger and it's only through circumstance it wasn't. Still a stupid decision on their part. Plain and simple. Backtrack and defend it all you want, but it's still a stupid and out of character decision Twilight made.
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Think what you like, but I’m sure they were cautious about it.
I thought Jedi Prince season 2 was the first priority after Eric Sparkle season 3 was finished
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I was working on this after the first chapter of The Jedi Prince II.
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Oh, okay
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Spike the Dog doesn’t exist in this story.
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wow
Harsh much?
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https://youtu.be/9FkASAgX-84
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isn't there a million years time skip?
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No.
Cybertron is roughly 100,000 light years from Earth, so assuming they went 10-20% the speed of light, it might have taken them 9 or so million years to reach Earth.
Ok yeah, that umm.... just felt rushed.
They should've heard an impact to believe it.
And nothing of with whats going with the girls lives.
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So, what's the targets?
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Just outside our solar system, since they’ve been trying to harvest resources from the outer planets. That shall be explained later.
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So, not Cyber Planet Keys or Mini-cons?
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Nope.
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Oh, well. Anyway I can help, Sir?
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Maybe you can help with chapter ideas and possibly vehicle modes for some of the Autobots.
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Dinobots, too?
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I already have ideas in mind for the Dinobots.
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Even Volcanius?
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I’m only including the five that were in G1. Grimlock, Slag, Sludge, Snarl, and Swoop.
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So. Cyberverse proved they can combined. And Swoop looked better smart and a girl
Aw man, some of the characters in the first chapter already got killed!?
Not a bad start for this crossover. There are a few corrections I have to make:
Uh, did they at least hear an impact of the crash landing? Did they see it? There has to be something that makes them believe they saw or heard something. This part feels rushed.
The entire descriptions of the girls such as...
...feels unnecessary. I'm sure most people here have seen "Equastria Girls" if not seen posters or pictures of them and already know what they look like. Cut those paragraphs out, and you're good to go.
These lines are literally run-on sentences. Remove the first coma and replace it with a semicolon in the latter line. The first one should be like this:
I hope this helps. Good luck with your story.
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Hey Mr. J