The Cheating Pear

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FriendsForever

FriendsForever #1 · Aug 7th, 2022 · · ·

Wow what would their children look like if going that way

accidentallyoffensive

accidentallyoffensive #2 · Aug 7th, 2022 · 6 · 3 ·

Ok, I can't up vote this, first of all it was cringe, like, the very essence of cringe, second it was anthro and I have a personal distaste for anthro even though a lot of people still like it, but worst of all you went butt to mouth, never go butt to mouth, unless your intentionally writing for that particular niche, it's right up there with scat and diapers.

But I also can't down vote this either, Pearbutter is an underwritten character, and Pear Butter cheating... absolutely unheard of!!! So I congratulate your originality and I acknowledge all the hard work you probably put into writing this. I'm not trying to be an asshole, I'm just voicing my opinion and offering what I hope is a little bit of constructive criticism.

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