"Creativity flows when boredom grows." -The Bored Author (of Doom)
This story is a sequel to The Hobo: The 'Laughing' Chef
The thrilling conclusion to The Hobo series. Explaining everything and revealing things that may or may not have been known. Follow Sunset as she makes mistakes, bargains, and questionable deeds.
A tale of secrets and reveals.
Note: The order of these chapters are in chronological order, if that helps with understanding, you're welcome. If not, sorry.
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I've got a good hunch that the mysterious girl was none other then Cozy Glow in the human world and something very sinister has happened to Sunset Shimmer.
Whatever that magical bell had done to Sunset Shimmer, it changed her back to her old self again.
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Correct! Ding ding ding, we have a winner!
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I knew it! LOL
So does all the terrible thing that happen to them because sunset the one who did it (evil sunset the one who burn Aj farm, etc) or because she stole their element and magic making terrible thing happen to them.
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That would make a lot of sense if it's actually true.
So is this a prequel to the series ?
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yeah
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she stole their elements and then did all the horrible things
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so sunset is dead? is she a ghost or something how did she come back i wish i knew how sunset died in the first place
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She never died. what gave u that thought
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from your twilight story
"Sunset Bucking Shimmer. I saw you die. I held your body! I MOURNED YOU!" Twilight was shaking in anger, hands clenched, and clipboard forgotten.
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ohh riiight...i admit, i actually forgot about that. Yes, i'll explain it in twilight's chapter later in the story. Thanks for reminding me!
And no, she is not a ghost. She faked her death
mmm this nice, i like.
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lol, glad u liked it
I do hope that Cozy Glow is brought to justice for all the pain and misery she caused Sunset and the others. Anyways great chapter, I'm very happy to hear that your father wants to read your stuff.
You mean you're not going to do ones for the Dazzlings and/or the Shadowbolts?
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Nope, i just dont know how they would fit into this story
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who knows?
and thanks! means a lot
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You've got a very good point there.
You're very welcome.
That was a interesting story so far goodluck with the rest of it.
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thanks you!
what i ok sunset just committed murder and she expects things to be just hunky doory plz tell me she is gonna pay for her crimes
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well i could say she would pay, but that would spoil things. So i'm just gonna say, who knows.
also, she committed arson, murdered the apple family, property damage, impersonation, and had a fake ID. She's got quite the rep.
Okay I'm completely and utterly lost what the heck happen!? Somebody explain to me what the heck is happening!? Did they just die? Is there a different conclusion cause this seems to me to be still unfinished?
I'm very lost now at what just happened? Did the girls all died from the grenade blast or will there be a different epilogue as this seems to be unfinished.
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The way I understand it is that when Cozy turned Sunset evil originally it never went away. All the good things she did to get the girls together was just to destroy them together. Her new ‘friends’ were in on it but we’d gonna turn against her and take it all for themselves, but Sunset was prepared for this and had a plan to take them out as well.
Basically following Cozy using the bell on Sunset she turned super evil and played the long game about destroying their lives and eventually taking over the world
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aye, this guy gets it!
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righto, so the grenade was a smoke grenade of some sort, knocked the girls unconscious. Sunset and the evil trio made plans together, then betrayed Sunset. BUT, Sunset figured out their plan and countered them using the alicorn amulet. whatever happens to them or the girls is up for you to decide. Or, I'll change it if somebody wants me to.
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Thanks for answering my question.
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no prob :)
Why didn’t she warn them about what happened?
You know, I wonder how many students wouldn’t said that if sunset didn’t reform?
So the bell sucked their personalities? I thought it just took their magic.
What is sunset planning?
Damn! I wonder if someone would actually do that?
So she literally killed an innocent man and framed fluttershy for it?
Why?
Sunset is a psycho.
Ok, the middle finger part is realistic.
Wasn’t fluttershy supposed to be mean?
What is tirek doing?
Why? She has something planned.
Ok, I’m confused. If I remember correctly sunset was pissed that rarity keep her generosity, but she stole her magic, whipped her memory, and caused the things she talked about to the girls. This story seems unfinished because despite everything she has done there was no consequence or reactions from the girls when they learned the truth. Pinkie seems to know the most, but is willing to go along with it. Does she know everything that’s going on?
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their personalities is their magic. Fluttershy's ability to talk to animals would not happen if she wasn't kind. It's all connected
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Indeed, Sunset is cruel and calculated.
And she thought of ghosts because Twilight thinks Sunset is dead, so if she returned to Twilight, then the she'll think Sunset is back from the dead.
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True true, but changes in personality has to take time. Her unkindness grows after more and more disappointment from her so called 'friends'
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Because it is unfinished, the rest is up to the reader's imagination on what happens next. The mysterious question that everyone asks, "what happens next?" Does Sunset lose? Does Sunset take over the world? Does Princess Twilight return and beat Sunset again? What about the Evil Trio?
It's all up to the reader to decide
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But wasn’t she mean during the graduation? This seems to take place not long after that.
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So it’s basically an open ending?
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Quite true, quite true.
Seems to me, I made a mistake, it happens. Don't take it to seriously
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Aye
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Oh ok