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Curious on the path this will go. Keep up the good writing!
GOD DAMNNNN, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
If he's a classic pop culture deerskull wendigo-with-an-E, why is the picture of a ghost horse windigo-with-an-i?
I have not begun reading your story yet, but I have to say it is an exciting concept. Stories like these bring some much-needed life into the Fimfiction sphere and our writing community so good job on that.
Iz good
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He changes between forms. Whenever his physical [wendigo] form is destroyed or incinerated, as is the case here and as was the case with Luna's magic beam in the Everfree Forest, his [windigo] soul takes shape into the icy ghost horse we know them for. That form is grounded in chaos, fighting and disharmony and once those aspects in the area end, the spectral form dissipates into the ground and reshapes into the physical monster.
OK, I'm hooked and can't wait for the next chapter.
Well this story has my interest.
So Luna kills his corporeal vessel and turns him into a ghost, then gets befriended. Celestia attacks him whilst sparring and nearly kills him...
I swear if Brian is gonna a keep on forgiving these bloodthirsty princesses, he best get some life insurance.
I like this story. The premise is interesting, and the writing is to my liking.
Can't wait to see where this goes.
Ooh this is veeryyy promising
Wunderbar
This is a really great start to the story.
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So, does his physical form look like the Leshen from the Witcher/Monster Hunter World?
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To me it seems to look like a Leshen, but with boney limbs that have a tad bit of meat/miscle on them instead of wood.
I need more!!!!
I’m intrigued.
You have good writing, but you might wanna cool it with the pictures.
Personally, I love a beautiful picture at the beginning of a chapter. To really set the mood.
But in any case, this is just my humble advice. I don’t know diddly squat about writing
Why is the plot so slow, and yet it feels rushed?
STOP WRITING SO ENIGMATICALLY.
plus I can see this going herd if you do my pics are shy,Luna,Twilight,pinky and Gilda but that's me
Neato
Neat.
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Fair. Thanks
So wendigoes are harmony beings? Like some kind of antibody that goes and eliminates the threat to harmony, and like a true antibody they don't have the capacity of distinguish a "common cold" from true threats?
ok i am intrigued with this story , i will be keeping a eye on this.
love the story and look forward to keeping up with its updates
Very interesting!
But that makes for concern about the portals that seemed to also appear with him, is he the only thing besides the purple Orcs? 😱
This was an interesting chapter!
Killed once more... This Equestria is no joke...
They get away with murder again... That he can force revival don't change it...
The reaction was understandable but again, really?