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BirbNerd17


Just a bird watcher making cute pony fics. I do all sorts of fics mostly everyone rated and no horror.

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Fluttershy takes Rainbow Dash to watch the annual butteryfly migration. Rainbow doesn’t want to go but she comes along. When she begins to enjoy watching watching the fluttering aerodynamic creatures she becomes embarrassed not wanting Fluttershy to know.

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Why did the guy who drew the cover art change the appearances of Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy so much?

Really cute, massively enjoyable story!!

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That would be me! And I changed the designs cause that’s just how I draw them.

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Your art is cute :heart:

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Uhhhhh, because they're creative and have a certain artstyle and why not?

Rainbow stared at the sky and laid back. It felt like forever to the date devil Pegasus before her friend signaled her to sit up.

It's 'daredevil' not date devil, also the word daredevil seems extra, the sentence will be better with out it.

Dash sat in silence? Watching the little creatures glide so effortlessly through the air. It’s like they weren’t even trying, she grabbed a barley bite with a wing and put it in her mouth, not looking away, fully captivated.

There's a question mark after silence that's not supposed to be there.

Good story though. Have a Derpy :derpytongue2:

That was a sweet story.:rainbowwild::yay:

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Thanks so much for the help! :twilightsmile:

That was a good story.

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