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Comrade Abigor


Here to write stories for your entertainment and my pleasure.

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Lets see where this goes!

well this is a good start.

Industrial social darwanism, that's a new low

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What? It fits the factory doesn't it? That's essentially what they do

Does The Rainbow Factory really count as a creepypasta?

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I mean, it is commonly known as one and it is essentially a scary story shared online so i guess it counts

" Simple, actually. I dislike capitalist industry. And i also dislike social darwinism. So it shouldn't be much of a guess that i very much fucking hate industrial social darwinism! " it spoke in a much angrier and aggressive tone, seeming to yell before calling down " Excuse my language. What i mean is i hate the factory in which you died. It violates the very principles i hold and so I want it down. I could bring it down myself but I'm a bit busy for it and also it's kinda boring when you can fix stuff with the snap of your fingers. And that's where you come in. I want You, my dear Scootaloo, to become my agent on your world and bring down the rainbow factory for me, avange yourself and your fellow comrades and end it's disgusting legacy once and for all. And in return you shall be given another chance in life "

Their are not enough fanfics about the rainbow factory being brought to its knee's and its legacy being annihilated. Please continue this story when you have the time to.

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Oh i will. As soon as i figure a name for the headless horse which i need to have in order to write the next chapter lol. Any suggestions on what Scootaloo should call her?

Finally got around to reading this today! Just want to say in reponse to the note at the end of chapter 3, not to worry about making Dash more sympathizable. Or at the very least regretful. I suppose it makes sense she'd be less psychotic with her friends behind her anyway as opposed to being at the factory. Obviously for as long as her friends don't know the truth there will always be some distance though. Whatever! It's much more interesting seeing someone's eternal battles. Actually if you dont mind me asking, do you have any plans for Scootaloo to attempt to look for some good in Dash? Not necessarily find it, she's understandably very traumatized haha. But surely if anypony got the caring side of Dash prior to the flight test it was Scootaloo.

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i am actually thinking on how to approach Scootaloo and Rainbow atm. Not going to spoil anything but i am in the process of planning but i can say this much she will see some good in Dash.

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I thought it was only found here, and not on the official Creepypasta wiki. On the other hand, I've read two "Creepypastas" on that site that were really just ordinary fanfics that the writer apparently decided not to put on a place like fanfiction.net...

Heyo, i rather enjoyed this story so far and i'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. HOPE YOU HAVE A FANTABULOUS DAY/NIGHT.

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Thank you:twilightsmile: I appreciate positive words first thing in the morning. And worry not the story will go on. You don't have to wait long. I just kinda had to redo the next few chapters cause of some plot changes. Yeah.

Is this going to be updated ever?

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Working on it. Haven't been on this site for a while. Neglected things. Now I'm working on making up for lost time.

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