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Comrade Abigor
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What does that have to do with anything?
It's a good start, but this first chapter would benefit from an editor or prereader to correct grammar errors. If you want, check out the Looking for Editors group.
Interesting start. This is definitely going to be a different kind of story.
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Not virgin in the literal sense. Virgin in the sense that I'm new to writing so I'm sorry for any mistakes that may be done and please don't be too harsh on me. Are my jokes really that hard to get? Like seriously i was pretty sure everyone will understand the virgin joke.
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Thanks for the tip
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Thanks
And yeah there aren't all that many twiarmordance stories out there (believe me i've searched for one and haven't been able to find one) so i decided if the internet doesn't give you what you want then you go and put it on the internet yourself. And that's how this story was born.
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Same with my Sunset Shimmer story. To read the kind of story I want. I have to write it. C.S. Lewis snd J.R.R
Tolkien had to do the same thing.
I want more
ignore the neg votes. those are trolls. i gave this a thumbs up. any story that contains twicest always gets a thumbs up from me
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Ohh don't worry i don't pay mind to them i don't really care if people like my stories at all to be honest I'm still gonna write them
While thank you kindly dear
I like your tastes. Delicious.
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And thou shall get more, child.
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Thank you father
I'd like to read more of your chapters too, ignore those bad votes, those are just votes, it's the story that count's and continue making more no matter what the votes. I'm starting to like this story here my friend. Hope to read more from you soon.
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Thanks. And yeah as I've said myself i don't really care about the negative votes at all i just want to write
The next chapter should be coming today.
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That's cool and a happy new year!
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I don't celebrate it but happy new year to you too
Nice
I want chrysalis in a fucking french maid outfit and I want it now!
Anyways nice chapter
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Ohh trust me you will have her that way and more. Soon.
I'm always happy to satisfy the demands of my readers so feel free to make suggestions regarding what you want to see
Man, that first chapter is definitely in the need of an editor. Spelling mistakes and pronoun errors abound.
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I don't have an editor as of now but i would appreciate some feedback comments
Nice
Now the question is when Cadence going to reveal the truth that she knows. She's not putting up a very good act and Shining and Twilight already have some suspicion.
Its just a matter of time before the truth is revealed.
This is my favorite story
I don't see how Cadence could not know and understand love for more than one person. Did she stopped loving Shining when she started loving Flurry? Would she stop loving Flurry if she'd give birth to another foal? As for sexual desire - is it completely vanishes for everyone else when person get married?
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Cadence just isn't familiar with polyamory. She is used to the monogamous concept of romantic love, everything else is new to her. As for sexual desire she doesn't understand how Shining and Twilight could have that for each other because she isn't familiar with consanguinamory either. Basically, although she is the princes of love, she is practically as ignorant about different forms of it as a new born baby is about the alphabet. But don't worry she will be called out about that fact later in the story, i intended it to be that way.
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That's good, still surprising considering her shipper background.
I feel like this chapter was a middle chapter. A bringe to get between the plot point. Let's see how the next one comes
Amazing
Darn it, Cadance! Stop running away and confront them! Show them how betrayed you feel that they been having sex behind your back for who knows how long.
I’m dying to see everyone’s reaction.
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Yes thank you i knew there was a word to describe this chapter that just wasn't coming to my brain at the time lol
First. Nice. Second. I would like a side story of abe or Scarlet. I wish to see the every day workings of this island and all the fucked up people in it. Third. If you do make a side story of the inslads local residences I would like to be one of them.
Good story, but these chapters are in dire need of an editor, preferably one that can catch spelling and grammatical mistakes.
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If you don't know, Abe will actually be appearing in my other stories, which technically makes all my stories side stories of each other. And yes since Abe is technically an eldritch god 'he' will actually be on all of them(although he will have different names and different forms. You don't expect an eldritch god to just have a pony form do you) and not just like different stories with same characters 'he' will actually be there. It pays having a character that has access to multiversal travel wouldn't you say so. Oh and Scarlet will also show up in my other stories as well, although a little different. In this story, Cadence will actually not only be studying Shining and Twi but Also Abe and Scarly and some other people in the village.
First of all yes you will get to see that. Second of all who said it's an island? Like in chapter two it is specified that BlackFlag village is just an anarchist village hidden in the middle of a forest two or three hours away from Ponyville. I don't know where you got the impression this is an island.
The village locals will appear throughout the whole story so no need for side stories.... although maybe one would be a good idea now that I think about it. But yeah i can add you in just give me your characters description and I'll add you right in.
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Working on it. English isn't my first language so i am aware i might make some mistakes.
Nice
Interesting story so far
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Just wait till you read the part where Syke! Didn't think i was going to spoil my own story now did you?
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you got me can’t believe I fell for that
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If you don't mind me asking when will the next chapter be out ?
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Soon. Perhaps even today. I have been busy with other stuff but now I'm back working on the next chapter
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Something that may help is to use the auto reader on here. It will help you find small mistakes like the dragon lord sister instead of the drag Lord's sister.
Nice.
Also someone tell me what's in raritys meal
OH, COME ON! YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!
I WAS HOPING CADANCE WOULD FINALLY REVEAL THAT SHE KNOWS, TO THEM.
That's the moment I dieing to see!
Nice.
Glad to have you back.
Side note. Use Google docs or grammarly to check for spelling mistakes. There was a few in these two chapters
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Oh not much just some dough, chopped horse meat, onion sauce and some ingredients i don't remember lol
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Glad to be back.
Thanks u
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Oh trust me that moment will come and will do so with a boom.
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I'm looking forward to it!
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I'm sorry. I've never really been good when telling when someone is just joking. Why isn't there an alternate universe tag?