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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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This story is a sequel to Cloudbusting


"There must have been a moment just before you hit the water,/When you were filled with a sense of peace and understanding./With the wind in your hair and the light in your eyes,/As you realized you were finally escaping." -Frank Turner, 'A Wave Across A Bay'

Prequel: “Cloudbusting

At her request, Silverstream wants Sandbar to teach her to surf. The pony is more than happy to teach, but he hopes that it's something that Silverstream can handle. Will the hippogriff be able to get the hang of being out on the water?


Cover art made by Pitangawang
Pre-read and edited by Striving for Harmony.

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Comments ( 3 )

This was very sweet.
On a side note, I'm glad I understood most of those terms despite never having surfed before XD

The hippogriff looked out at the sea with Sandbar for a moment before turning back to him. While looking at him, Silverstream took note of the pony. There was something she wanted to say to him in that moment, but she held her tongue.

Aww she was starting to have feelings for him

Aww this is a pretty nice story and it's really nice to see Sandbar and silverstream hanging out with each other actually both of them have in common with each other about the ocean and she's teaching her how to surf and everything and it's always nice to see that and she was very close of drowning but good thing Sanndbar was there to save her and after that they basically just hang out and silverstream really likes him a lot this is a pretty sweet and underrated shipping story I hope to see this again well keep up the good work

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