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Glam Slam


I will rise to greatness and begin A restorationist movement for the oddly Christianity-paralelling fandom which is My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fandom.

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Anon meets Greta while in Griffonstone. One thing leads to another, and they start dating.

This is My First Story, and I decided to write from scratch, off the top of My head.

Please leave your thoughts in tge Comments, including recommendations and pointing out mistakes in etiquette, as I will fix any I missed before publishibg as soon asI can.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 16 )

Heh, not too bad for a first story, could use a little editing though.

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It is an absolute honour. I am so-glad you appreciate My work.

I was not planning definitively to make any new Chapters, but I have to. So I am on it, Chief.

which just-so-happened to be all eyes present except yours, though your peepers soon jpined to look down.

Joined.

They looked... Flustered. So, as you slowly began to make your way through the once-elabourate city

Elaborate

be the rest of the townspeaople, - er, townsponiea?

Towns people

Ooh, so where are you from?! I have never seeb A Minotaur

Seen

This rather gabby little sweetheart did not take notice aa your cheeks

As

swore she shot you the most alluring wink you gad ever seen

Had

The moment you said "So", she lifted her head slightly, than

Then

she looked into ypur eyes longingly."Anon

Your

You later came to learn that the petna.e

Pet name

Nintendо̄ nerd and all, but you can not pass up on the

Cannot

which is an honour and privelage you unfortunately

Privilege

A quiet moment passes between all you in tge tavern, leavi g the town soundibg

The, leaving, sounding.

"No, not much at all. It's just that I bever got A darned chance to try Matcha before now!" you balked.

Never.

You both began blushibg, wuth she and tge rest of the tavern's guests blushing deeper than they already were.

Blushing, the , with.

Pre-emptive comment: I agree; Greta is completely under-appreciated.

11259978
Great to hear somepony else agrees! I have seen your work before, and I figured the rider must be A cool guy. :yay:

Why does the synopsis have randomly capitalized words in it?

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European English for. "Griffon" is Americanised English and is technically inaccurate.

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I capitalise the names of numbers "One, Two, Three..." because names of Letters are supposed to be capitalised. Think "Iota",or "Pi". Since they should be capitalised, as should decimal values like Hundredths, I capitalise First, Second, Et cetera.
"My" is capitalised because the personal pronoun is A variant of Mu, which is similar to the M character. Just as I and A should be capitalised when used as words, so too should My. I could just type M, but I wish not to xause confusion. Inallhonousty, even That should be capitalised, as the history of the character Tgat is debated, though tge cgaracter/Letter may have come First, as may also be the case with And.

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Just giving you context since you asked.

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Wait... Were you just commenting about how the whole town is following Anon around like A bunch of stray Puppies?

What possibly awauts you here in this new grandious world?

That was the question. I was just answering it.

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Ohhh, I understand.

My sincere apologies!

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It's ok. I've always wondered what the difference was anyway.

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Yeah, European English is fascinating. :pinkiesmile:

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