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Specialist Sunflower, an ordinarily sized member of the Royal Guards, enjoys a day off work by the suburbs of Manehatten.

Tags (by chapter):

  1. macro, growth, extrajudicial law enforcement, too much plot and not enough Plot.
  2. macro, tuft cuddles, property damage, unsolicited romantic advances

No vore/farts/gore/deaths/explicit stuff.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

Neat little story, but there seem to be some times where the stallion Sunflower captured is referred to by feminine pronouns. For example:

Looking inside, she saw the pony frantically working with her keys on a door.

Dangling dozens of feet in the air, the pony looked up to the eyes of the giant who had caught her.

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Thank you! I made the switch halfway through, so I failed to catch all of them.

Nice work on your story!

Very nice! we need more good macro fic like this. :twilightsmile:

Is there going to be more of this story? Since it's now suddenly marked as incomplete.

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A little bit. <1k words, unless I get another new idea.

Isn't a croupier somebody who works in a casino?

11279904
shit
I grabbed a word from Wikipedia that sounded approximately correct. What do you think I ought to change it to?

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Looking at the outfit and the character's profession I'd suggest cuirass.

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