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Blck-Dynomite


This is not a resurgence, nor a resurrection. This is a revamp! I am Blck-Dynomite! And I have returned! Still writing sexy horse words. BOOM BABY!

Comments ( 17 )

nice work

Pretty good, although I'm a bit disappointed at that morning after pill. xD

11251383 Well, this was unplanned. The next time however...:ajsmug:

11251380 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

11251381 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

Fimfic fell off

GaRbS #7 · May 25th, 2022 · · 1 ·

Oh man, this has to be the first time I see Luster Dawn being either Twilight or Sunset's daughter, very good stuff.

Interesting, sounds like you have a part 2 in the works?

Quite a short desc.

11251698 Eh, it hadn't crossed my mind. It's for the contest, 1 of 2 entries. The second should be rolling out here in a day or two.
But if people want a sequel, I'll think about it. :duck:

11251684 Precisely why I did it. I've looked up all of the fics involving Luster, and most of them are her being Sunburst and Starlight's daughter, so I decided to go at this from a different angle.

11252123 Short, sweet, and to the point. No real story involved, just porn. :ajsmug:

11252125
I'm realizing in hindsight that might have been misinterpreted. I don't mean the main description is quite short, I'm looking at the short description and going "huh. quite the blurb you have there".

Is it incest if your kid doesn't know you're their parent?

I could give you the boring science answer, but that's not how fetishes work. It's the kind of edge case where different loins will have different answers.

11251383

No form of contraceptive is 100% effective :trollestia:

Sequel or prequel with Sunset present?

This was pretty dope, hope there’s more

Not bad. Could have used a bit more proofreading.

The sex itself seemed pretty abrupt and mindless. Could have used more buildup, especially more playing with Twi being reluctant but not being able to say why.

It could have been made more clear early on that Sunset Shimmer was the ‘father’. That wasn’t totally clear until later on. And if it was clear earlier, the story could have made better use of the parallels between Sunset and Luster during the seduction.

There’s also kind of a weird disconnect between dominating Twi and calling her Mommy. Usually the one being called mommy or daddy would be the dominant one, regardless of age or actual relationship. Heck, it could have been an awesome moment of actual dommyness if Luster had said, “No, you’re going to call ME mommy!”

The dirty talk in general was a bit over the top and not making sense.

It is nice to see royal Twilight being used in clopfics, though. And Luster Dawn, too. Neither of them get enough love!

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