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GaryOak


Writing graduate who loves cartoon horses and all manner of silly things. Occasionally writes serious stories. A divine Swedish woman drew this avatar.

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And here I thought I'd have to wait a year for the next fic from you! :P

Thanks a lot for your effort, Gary! Imma reading it nao! :3

Hey, saw you at Bronycon! Can't say I was surprised to see this was your handiwork, you sick futa worshiping bastard. Stay awesome.

Omg....Garyoak you beautiful basterd you! I got stiff from just staring at your name for a new fic.

Hope you remember me! Nividia's genderbent fan?

So, what’s next?

Don't be silly. Celestia makes the rules, so nothing she does can be a sin.
I hope I didn't take the fun out of fucking her by saying that :raritydespair:

Oh but well done.

To those that don't like these types of stories, you can choke on Maud's, Shy's, and Twi's massive marecocks all at once because this was awesome!! Gary, I hope you make more like these cause I truly like stories like these.

The one with Rarity was good, this one was even better and now you tease us with a possible Luna story. The anticipation for the sequel will be intense.

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There were a couple of passages you really helped improve in particular.
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Yeah, it's my Bronycon surprise story.
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Futa is love, futa is life.
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It's been so long! I totally remember you, and I miss Nvidia very much. Panacea :heart:
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The way I depict anthro Celestia, it's impossible for it to not be fun to fuck her.
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:heart: Thanks, man.
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I really can't help myself with these types of endings. I teased this story at the end of Tailoring, too.

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Oh you! Its Remedy Fortuitous Heart now. Take a look at my stories! I hope I make you proud!

I just finished the thing and I have to say this was a fantastic, and really hot story! And I love how you do those endings, teasing for a sequel :P
Really, thank you very much again for this! It really was a nice surprise ^^

Could we get a one-shot involving Sunset?

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Good point. You'd have to try really hard to make any Celestia unfuckable.

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:heart:
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I'll see what I can do. My schedule really sucks. But in any case, knowing that I helped someone discover what they can do with writing is amazing in and of itself.
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Thank you! Sometimes, I don't come up with the endings until much later, but in this story's case, I had it planned right away. How do you think Celestia found out about everything and knew to wear that gown in particular? :trollestia:
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She's probably my favourite character to write, whether or not the story's porn.
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I've had ideas for clopfics, but none involving her, really. I guess I prefer to write these characters as anthro, since they're still kind of ponies, except with T&A,

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Will you make something else like this but with Dash and Fluttershy?

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I meant Anthro Sunset. If she came from an Anthro Equestria, then she would be an Anthro pony upon returning to said Equestria. And I also meant a one-shot involving this Twilight and Sunset.

This was a great fic.

But now I have to wait for the next one because you just had to put in that last bit.

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My first anthro story involved that exact pairing, actually.
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Ooh, I see what you mean. I don't have any plans for that, but I'm not against the idea or anything.

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It's a really really bad habit of mine. At least in this case, it's actually how Celestia found out about all of Twilight's repressed feelings and urges.

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No problem. Spoiler alert: Fluttershy has the biggest dick in Equestria.

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Jesus Christ. Question, if I decide to make a Futaquestria story would you like to join forces and help me write it?

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I'm about to have negative time, especially since I'm 136k words deep into a 300-400k word project (and Battle for Azeroth is coming out in 2 weeks, and university resumes in September). BUT. I can be a consultant when it comes to their dimensions. My tumblr-fuelled perversions have caused me to build up a fairly deep headcanon for their sizes, which you can see at work in all four of my anthro fics.

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Okay I was just wondering, thank you.

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Yeah, it sucks. :raritydespair: I'm still cool with sharing my futaquestria headcanon, though.

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Okay but my story was gonna be with the entirety of Equestria being all female and all are futas.

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Oddly enough, my headcanon is that most of them aren't futas. They get fucked by the futas.

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I know but that's where my OC human girl comes in.

Wonder if Spike has that dangerous sex drive and unleashed it out on Starlight that it flooded the castle?

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Seeing that Twilight still seems to be growing due to her new alicorn form, maybe Twilight will get there in time, though xD

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Heh, wonder who's been on a comment downvoting spree. Anyway, I've been explicitly told by show staff that Fluttershy does indeed have the biggest dick in Equestria. It's hard to argue with that.

Three for three, my man! I can only hope you enjoy writing these as much as I like reading them.

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:pinkiehappy: Once I finally get into them, they're a lot of fun. But ho boy, are they draining.

I have to admit, I wasnt expecting to enjoy this as much as I did. The sex was hot, as were the descriptions of the characters, even if they were a bit more larger than life than I'd normally enjoy. The character development was good too, it actually made the sex worth it. And the meal description made me hungry!
My only personal disappointments are that with all that glorious boob there was no milk, and that nopony got it in the butt, and that Celestia wasn't a futa too. Nonetheless, still enjoyed it!

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Thanks so much for the kind comment!

I have to admit, I wasnt expecting to enjoy this as much as I did.

Out of curiosity, what prompted the lessened expectations compared to your reaction? Was it how I branded the story (description/tags), or did you just not expect the content to be your thing, but were pleasantly surprised? I'm asking because I'm wondering if I made a mistake when I wrote the descriptions and whatnot.

The sex was hot, as were the descriptions of the characters, even if they were a bit more larger than life than I'd normally enjoy.

That's the most important part. When you're talking about largeness, you're talking about their stature, or their proportions? I might've gone a bit far (I'm personally not into macro at all), but my intention was to account for them just being much larger than average. For instance, in the series, Celestia dwarfs everypony else, so I figured she'd be close to 8 feet tall if she were humanoid. Maybe 7-ish feet would've been more realistic, with Luna at around 6'6" and Twilight at just over 6 feet?

The character development was good too, it actually made the sex worth it. And the meal description made me hungry!

That's one reaction I was hoping for when I wrote all the pre-sex stuff. I'm striving to have a lot of vivid detail in my main project, so I kind of wrote all this stuff out of habit. I especially like that you got hungry from the meal description, since it's (mostly) just food meant for horses. Making food they'd eat sound appetizing to humans was a fun challenge.

My only personal disappointments are that with all that glorious boob there was no milk, and that nopony got it in the butt, and that Celestia wasn't a futa too. Nonetheless, still enjoyed it!

I'm glad you liked it in spite of that. The first two aren't really my things, which is why I didn't write them (which is the same reason I'll never write futa on male). I guess I'm kind of selfish when it comes to writing sex stuff. Celestia not being a futa is more of a byproduct of my convoluted anthro headcanon, which all of my anthro stories follow. I basically have a mental list of sizes/proportions for most of the characters, and whether or not they're futa, and I always refer to that when I write an anthro fic.

Thanks again for reading!

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Thanks for replying, and in such detail too - I appreciate being given the chance to have a proper discussion with an author!
It sounds slightly odd almost to say, but because the sexual assets of the characters were so emphasized in the description, I was almost expecting (not meaning to sound demeaning or insulting by any means) a lower standard of story-craft and language than I received.
I'm no expert myself (I mean, look at my profile; I have no stories submitted as yet!) but I come from a background of having studied writing, and it's rare to find a combination of - please excuse painting with a broad brush - fetish-ey clop + good spelling/grammar/language use (I could, if I wished to be crude, use the phrase 'one handed/hoofed typing...). I was pleasantly and thoroughly pleased to find your work not being the case in that regard.

Regarding the second point, their stature I had no problems with; I'll make it no secret that I find the idea of a potential partner or object of desire/lust being taller than me exhilarating, and 6+ foot tall women/herms/futas/whatever you like is absolutely fine with me. I was referring more to their proportions and their pulchritude. Mark my words, it's certainly no bad thing; I very much enjoyed the mental picture they evoked, just more 'generous' than I am accustomed to. And hey, fantasy is wonderful. Picturing someone in reality with those dimensions is far less alluring when you think of the real-life problems it would accrue, as opposed to the thrills and excitement that magic and fantasy give us.
I also agree with your thoughts that as alicorns, Twi, Celestia, et al should and would have more physically defined and 'superior' physiques, as creatures of more powerful and raw magics flowing through them.

The fact that you say that you wrote the descriptive stuff out of habit is a fantastic thing; it's great to hear that, as it means your writing comes naturally, and that setting the scene is as important as the 'payoff' of the clop scenes. Plus that same description of taste, smell, colour and texture is as sensual with the food as it is with the later parts of Twiggles and Celly coupling, and makes a nice comparison. The same with things like the description of Princess Snowglobes dress as well, it really helps bring the senses into focus, and adds to Twi's perspective and how much the act is important to her, as well as adding another dimension to the eroticism of it.

And, finally, as I said; It's all personal perspective. I'm not going to downvote or condemn anyone for not putting my own quirks or kinks in their own stories, especially when otherwise written so well, and so fun and/or exciting. Writing what you enjoy will always lead to a better end result, but thank you for at least replying and acknowledging my remarks, and also for not kink-shaming!

Please keep writing more - I like that you're actually laying out a universe/setting with each story, and despite the clop-factor being the main part, it's good to see there's some more thought behind it. Also, I appreciate you taking the time to reply to me personally, and discuss things :)

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Thanks for replying, and in such detail too - I appreciate being given the chance to have a proper discussion with an author!

Not a problem! I like interacting with my readers. That's what comments are for, eh?

It sounds slightly odd almost to say, but because the sexual assets of the characters were so emphasized in the description [...] I was pleasantly and thoroughly pleased to find your work not being the case in that regard.

Thanks for that. It's always good to know what impressions that sort of thing leaves. I'm glad I was able to subvert your expectations!

I was referring more to their proportions and their pulchritude. Mark my words, it's certainly no bad thing; I very much enjoyed the mental picture they evoked, just more 'generous' than I am accustomed to.

Ah, I see. Part of Celestia's powers make her impervious to back problems. :pinkiehappy:

The fact that you say that you wrote the descriptive stuff out of habit is a fantastic thing; it's great to hear that [...] as well as adding another dimension to the eroticism of it.

I love seeing comments like this because it's exactly what I was trying to achieve. I'm sure all writers go through this, but when I write certain parts of a story, I'm hoping for specific reactions.

Writing what you enjoy will always lead to a better end result, but thank you for at least replying and acknowledging my remarks, and also for not kink-shaming!

That's kind of my philosophy when writing these things. I only write the stuff I enjoy, since I know I'll be putting more into it. Since I don't really like futa on male, I won't be able to write it as well without struggling through it. And kink-shaming when it comes to clopfics is kind of... yeah. One guy swore at me in the comments for Hurricane Futashy for writing futa (it was my first anthro story), and then I checked his favourites list only to discover multiple rape fics in there. Yeah. People like what they like, and glass houses and all that. That's why I try to accurately tag kinks in spoilers in the description, so people know whether or not they want to read my fic before potentially wasting their time with it.

Please keep writing more - I like that you're actually laying out a universe/setting with each story, and despite the clop-factor being the main part, it's good to see there's some more thought behind it. Also, I appreciate you taking the time to reply to me personally, and discuss things :)

These are spur of the moment fics, usually, so I can't say when the next moment will come. At least I have 3 other stories in this setting, so there's that!

Ok fic but wow do you like to chew scenery.

*Slams money on table* Threesomes please.
Obvious one: Luna/Twi/Celestia
Teased One(?): RD/Flutter/Rarity
But at least let me beg for a Flutter/Rarity chapter in this clop fest

are there any plans for a three some for these three because im wondering what luna can do to twi since luna is the mistress of the night

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A threesome story in this setting is coming ( :trollestia: ), but it's not the one you're asking for. I'll be publishing it sometime mid-May. Have fun speculating!

Will the sequel be coming out soon?

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I honestly have no idea when I plan on doing a sequel.

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Alright, no worries bro. I look forward to it all the same.

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Thanks very much for your patience! :heart:

"The Magic of Friendship fountained all over Celestia's beautiful face." I want this engraved on my tombstone when I die πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ thank you for the wonderful smut, I greatly enjoyed it.

Let there be sequel with Luna. Praying to the heavens. Please! :yay:

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