Just a guy who likes MLP, and certain characters from the show. I also like having Steve Blum as the voice of King Sombra. I don’t know why; I just do.
Spike is just relaxing, and having some off time to himself, when suddenly he gets summoned by Twilight to do some grocery shopping. Considering that Twilight was yet again busy, he was reluctant, but went anyways.
Will Spike’s errand end well? Or will it go up in flames in stereotypical cartoon esque fashion?
Only one way to find out!
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. If you want me to that is
Holy hell you mad genius XD. I can make something like that into a sequel for this
I appreciate a nice slice of life story as much as the next guy, but uh……
Dear GOD does this need editing.
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To suffer the life of a male sibling going to the grocery store "It (The pain) must be shared"
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That figures… . But then again it’s a short story, so… . Okay
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XD. Please do more
I wanted to like this story, but there are just too many issues with it for me. "Spike goes grocery shopping" is a great slice-of-life comedy premise, which is why I'm disappointed in the actual implementation. Ignoring the mechanical issues, of which there are many, the biggest problem is that this story's humor depends on writing Spike out of character. Spike is not shy; if anything the opposite is true. Also, the idea that Spike could destroy an entire grocery store with a sneeze is much too ridiculous for an otherwise grounded story.
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Oh oops. I forgot to put a random tag on there. My mistake
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Anarchy and Calamity have run amuck in Equestria ! What am I going to do? Spike!
while Discord laughs drinking his glass
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XD. Again, again!
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So Rarity it was a test that brought you to pick Spike as your husband?
Well if you put it that way... Yes it was a...
A test of courage?
no
A test of quality education?
no
A test of Royal Nobility?
NO
A fashion test ?
noooooo
What kind of test are we talking about?
A pregnancy test.
A quick week of courting and a quicker wedding and we can spend the rest of our honeymoon fire proofing my boutique
Here's a gift list
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XD. More, more!
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After 36 hours of labor I delivered twin draconiquis hybrids and I didn't feel a thing - I feel great!
Poor Discord 36 hours of pure torcher 
He even walks painfully
I wanted cute fluffy baby bunnies
For the hundredth time IT DOESN'T WORK THAT WAY!
Well look at that . . . Discord delivered , Cute little baby bunnies 
Twilight, Apologize to my Discord, I got bunnies over hybrids
Idea!
... ???
Rarity! what are you doing with Spike?
More bunnies
Bunnies
We're not dealing with Discord here, But they will get a ticket for indecent in public
Dude, I want some of that!
Hot Mare on Dragon!
I can breath... Help
Get a hotel room you two, Celestia you aint helping, git! before I get the hose on you.
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XD. This is pure entertainment right here!
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This is so random I love it!
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maybe it is a trolling comedy.
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Probably. I honestly never thought of it that way XD
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XD. That’s awesome
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That actually gave me an idea. Would you be fine if a wrote a sequel to this story, with Spike running from Celestia?
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Oh, big time 😂😂😂
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Thx!
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No problem