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Mancin


"Look upon the fields in which I grow my Fucks...and you will see that they are Barren..."

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A bimbo story where they're not braindead airheads? I'm intrigued.

Good balance of overclocked libido and actual characters. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Boobs and butts are bigger than plausible but at least the characters are still kinda there. Love that nice difference

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Questionable Artist Colon Liu Ting, from the webpage Pony Breast Expansion Luscious. No link 'cause NSFW.

Damn it, fuck, not again, the anti-bimbo energy field has failed! GET THE ABB! ANTI-BIMBO-BOMBS AWAY!

This post was authorized by the Multiverse Chaos Control Authority's Horny Police Division.

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lol...the Multiverse Chaos Control Authority's Horny Police Division is overpaid, and on a futile mission.

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A futile mission you say? Well, tell me, what happens when the multiverse becomes a cesspool of sexual excess and chaos? Well, I ain't sure, but I think you get a massive fucking orgy. So yeah, we probably don't want that.
Although your right about us being overpaid, the other divisions could definitely use some payment, the anti villain victory division could use some love, especially to take down fucking sombra, that dude been cheating to win in his stories.

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Well, tell me, what happens when the multiverse becomes a cesspool of sexual excess and chaos? Well, I ain't sure, but I think you get a massive fucking orgy.

You say that as if that's a bad thing...

I don't think that's quite what they mean by "never tickle a sleeping dragon."

I like this story but I was hoping for more Sparity. After a little foreplay Pinkie interrupts and then skips a tired Rarity who looks like she went through several rounds with Spike and you skipped all of them.

I hope for more Sparity but I assume that will come after the other girls get some "screen time."

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That was a conscious decision to leave what happened in the imaginations of the readers, as I didn't want to overwhelm them with too much imagery so soon after the "battle."

Rest assured, we'll be seeing scenes of "Sparity," as you cutely put it, very soon!

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Knowing FimFiction as I do, I know that if one reader voiced disappointment with something in a story, there were probably quite a few others that felt the same. SO, I went back and added the "Sparity" moments you were all missing.

Enjoy!

Thank you Mancin. You didn't have to do that but I'm glad you did. This was a great addition to this chapter and it end just as I had originally hoped, with Spike ready to go again be skipping to the aftermath keeping that "leave it to the reader's imagination," vibe you had intended.


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Thank you Mancin. You didn't have to do that but I'm glad you did. This was a great addition to this chapter and it end just as I had originally hoped, with Spike ready to go again be skipping to the aftermath keeping that "leave it to the reader's imagination," vibe you had intended.

I can hardly wait for the next for Rarity to "tame the beast" but until then I assume you've got plans for the other girls. I curious about Fluttershy who was oddly aggressive over AJ with Big Mac. Is that a foreshadow of some FlutterMac or will we see other partners for her like Treehugger, Bulk Biceps or random animals like a bear.

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This was a great chapter. I'm left wondering if this is going to be a Spike harem story or if Twilight and Rarity will be able to keep Spike to themselves.

I feel sorry for Twilight. Chess is a “thinking” game. With all the blood flow moving toward the lower end, I doubt any stallion is going to have the patience for this kind of game.

Small correction: Twilight should be flipping the sign "from Closed to Open," not the other way around.
Unless, of course, she wants Rarity all to herself.

Yeah, I don't see the strip chess going well. This, on the other hand, appears to be just what Maud needed.

Well! Everything went better than expected. I should've known better than to doubt Twilight.

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Indeed. This is yet another example of the characters taking on a life of their own, for when the idea first came to me I had NO clue how to make it work! But as I was writing the scene, a clear picture formed of Rarity sitting there looking sullen, Twilight being dorky but still sexy, and then it was as if the scene itself was directing my writing after the first customer showed up. As if...a stable wormhole had opened up, and I could actually see into another reality, and I simply wrote down what I saw...


...or maybe I'm just crazy...

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It can be very hard to tell the difference when inspiration starts flowing.

Could somepony Pease write the prequel to this story? Or is there a story that details the transformation of Ponyville to Slutville?

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Well, as 'Slutville' is my invention, I don't know of any other stories about it.

But, you've given me the idea: perhaps I should write the prequel which outlines The Change. I think that would be fun!

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I agree. I personally hate not knowing of an event mentioned in a story. A prequel story like The Change would be great

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That could be fun to see; how much are you willing to bet it has something to do with the CMC fooling around with magic? Of course, it could probably involve Spike or Starlight, possibly both, doing something with magic while Twilight was busy, then again, it could also involve Discord in some way. So many possibilities to choose from.

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I see what you did there...well played!

And don't worry: I've explored the sexy shenanigans with the Mane Six, and now the MILFs...it's high time for the younger mares to end up in a pile covered in hot, sticky cum...with alllll their holes violated...sucking cocks and discovering the joys of BIG dicks in their asses...

It's high time for some "filly" fun, and perhaps Spike will be one of the ones they encounter!

That worked out for the Crusaders, but Diamond has quite the Catch-22 to deal with. Can't get the body she wants without sex, and can't get sex without the body she wants. Of course, if she'd just stayed to listen for a little longer...

Ah well. You can lead the horse to water, but there's no helping if she demands Perrier.

Would Twilight bang Deep Blue?

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Of COURSE she wouldn't bang it, silly person, as it doesn't have a cock!

BUT...she would be EXTREMELY turned on by it!

Rather dramatic effect on Pip, huh? A little confidence (and dramatic physical transformation) can go a long way.

I'm not a big fan of bimbo stories but this is clear exception! Love the story so far.

"Why, hello , Spike!" she trilled musically. "Are you eighteen yet?"

Why does this line alone do things for me?...

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Most likely because Rarity is SUCH a hot bimbo and the line implies she's more than willing to..."share." (giggity!)

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