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Paradise Gem had worked towards one goal her whole life. Her work and ambitions revolved around learning and mastering magic.

But stands the question - once you dedicate your whole life to one goal...What is to be done once it becomes obsolete?

To die in the past? Or to thrive in the future?

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I can't believe this whole time I forgot to do this, but I wanted to say thank you for choosing this fic to be the winner of the contest!!!

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This was really nice! You somehow nailed the original flavor of the show with your storybook-esque narration while also still talking about... well, war and all the terrors that come with encounter it first-hand. I honestly thought it was a nuke at first, but having Gem's ultimate weapon be countermeasures was a nice twist that fit her character way too well. It's also nice that you didn't specify much about the war itself, leaving Gem herself to carry much of the story, and she delivers.

I don't have much else to say. Thank you for the nice story!

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Aaaaaaaa! Thank you so much for the awesome feedback! And thank you for reading!!

I absolutely love this fic and I have no proper words to express that love! Fantastic job and keep up the good work!

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Eeeeee! Thank you so so much! This means a lot to me to hear!!!

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