Pretty good chapter, now only Pinkie and Sci-Twi are left standing. Rainbow breaking so easily does seem odd as she is the most strong willed of the bunch along with AJ. The work around that Aria was able to seduce her I suppose makes a little more sense and helps explain it, though I question needing to make Rainbow a full on Lesbian in this story. Just seems cliche that the uber athletic, tomboy with Rainbow hair is the only fully gay girl out of the bunch. Honestly making Rarity or Fluttershy as the lesbian of the group would've been a little more interesting.
Still it was interesting that they were able to use a pretty simple method to seduce her and the image at the end of Adagio using AJ as a chair of all things is an interesting mental image.
Now I'm just wondering how they can get someone like Pinkie under their thumb and if any of this mental manipulation is reversible.
11220148 It kinda came up in the first chapter, they know but don't care. Celestia showed that just because someone's great in Equestria doesn't mean they're anyone special in EQGland, and Sci-Twi is irrelevant to their plot or revenge. So they don't see any reason to gun for her.
I like this story, but I’m a bit disappointed we don’t so more/if any of th thoughts of the brainwashed girls. Like for instance What Sunset is up to outside of the massage area. What she is doing at home, Of how much she loves her new situation or her thoughts upon seeing hypnotized Applejack and Rainbow
“Two left: a moron, and a princess who will just be a clueless human over on this side.
First, no one calls Pinkie a moron and disrespects her, and gets away with it. Remember, human Pinkie was turning pictures of balloons into the real thing *before* magic supposedly returned to the place.
Second ... How in the heck? Last Chapter, Twilight got all the proof she needed that something was going on. Both Rainbow and Pinkie should be fully alert. Heck, why did you not have all three show up as "Safety" checks here?
Seriously -- Rainbow, warned, acts as driver for Sunset; Twilight and Pinkie show up in their own car, and come in as Rainbow's support.
Three on three if there's a battle. And between Rainbow's strength, Pinkie's chaos, and Twilight ... well, think she'd come up with a way for her phone to record things without anyone noticing? Of course.
DAMN.
Dang. The last chapters were great but there's nothing that quite compares to some proper traditional hypnosis.
Pretty good chapter, now only Pinkie and Sci-Twi are left standing. Rainbow breaking so easily does seem odd as she is the most strong willed of the bunch along with AJ. The work around that Aria was able to seduce her I suppose makes a little more sense and helps explain it, though I question needing to make Rainbow a full on Lesbian in this story. Just seems cliche that the uber athletic, tomboy with Rainbow hair is the only fully gay girl out of the bunch. Honestly making Rarity or Fluttershy as the lesbian of the group would've been a little more interesting.
Still it was interesting that they were able to use a pretty simple method to seduce her and the image at the end of Adagio using AJ as a chair of all things is an interesting mental image.
Now I'm just wondering how they can get someone like Pinkie under their thumb and if any of this mental manipulation is reversible.
Ooh, they don't *know* about sci twi... dangerous! Not to mention Pinkie... hmmm. This is a fun story to follow.
Also good to see Aria getting to shine!
Don't the Dazzlings know about Sci-Twi? Or is she just not a priority?
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It kinda came up in the first chapter, they know but don't care. Celestia showed that just because someone's great in Equestria doesn't mean they're anyone special in EQGland, and Sci-Twi is irrelevant to their plot or revenge. So they don't see any reason to gun for her.
I like this story, but I’m a bit disappointed we don’t so more/if any of th thoughts of the brainwashed girls. Like for instance What Sunset is up to outside of the massage area. What she is doing at home, Of how much she loves her new situation or her thoughts upon seeing hypnotized Applejack and Rainbow
holy crap, u actually made the RAINBOW DASH chapter hot, too! im legit impressed O__O
First, no one calls Pinkie a moron and disrespects her, and gets away with it. Remember, human Pinkie was turning pictures of balloons into the real thing *before* magic supposedly returned to the place.
Second ... How in the heck? Last Chapter, Twilight got all the proof she needed that something was going on. Both Rainbow and Pinkie should be fully alert. Heck, why did you not have all three show up as "Safety" checks here?
Seriously -- Rainbow, warned, acts as driver for Sunset; Twilight and Pinkie show up in their own car, and come in as Rainbow's support.
Three on three if there's a battle. And between Rainbow's strength, Pinkie's chaos, and Twilight ... well, think she'd come up with a way for her phone to record things without anyone noticing? Of course.