A powerful diesel electric locomotive and it's driver Max somehow were transported to Equestria.
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Source for Image : 120 269-6 (Taigatrommel)des SEM im Bw Chemnitz-Hilbersdorf - Bahnbilder.de
A Video about the Taigatrommel: Die Taigatrommel - YouTube ( The video is in German use subtitles)
I recommend the tool "Grammarly". Even in its free version - which I use - it helps with punctuation and word spelling. Of course, it may have some trouble with the more complex or foreign words such as "Taigatrommel", so just add those kinds of words to its dictionary.
Also, it's "Equestria", not "Equstria". You wrote that in the title.
You're, your indicates position (ie: "this is yours," or, "it is your apple")
You should instead write "A wolf made out of wood" your character doesn't know what a timber wolf is.
Is the engine pulling any coaches or freight?
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The train was on it's way to another railyard to pick up it's next cargo before Max and his train was magically transported to Equestria.
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So it was an engine or a locomotive.
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It is a diesel electric locomotive. The diesel generator is the main engine.
Can't wait for next chapter ☺️
Is this story alive or dead ?
2024, I'm hoping this story isn't toast