In which a filly Rainbow Dash is awoken by a night terror, and she decides the best way to overcome her fear is to spend some time cuddling with you.
A/N: This story is just cute for the sake of cute. No real plot or anything.
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While this one is a little short, I actually liked it. It had it's point across and this honestly did remind me of what happened around the timeline of "My Little Dashie" I'd see that happening in that story and I think you did it pretty well. Kudos for you.
1277420 Never in all my time writing have I ever tried writing a cute fic before, so I decided to give it a shot. Filly Rainbow Dash seemed like the perfect target.
Like you said, a little short, but I like how it turned out.
I give my own story an 8/10.
Hey it worked so I give you props for it.
You sir, wrote an excellent piece of work.
Have a mustache
Wow. Short and sweet. Can't believe I actually liked it.
I d'aawd
This is so cute. I love it.
that is so cute i loved it
Pls make more of these cute stories, they are awesome!
Offically Carnage Approved!
Excellent story, nice one!
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To be honest, I didn't care for this story. I thought that the "cuteness" felt forced to me. But, I guess you can keep writing like this, because it seems like a lot of people like it.
1279208 Thanks, I DO like mustaches :D
1279225 I must, I must, I MUST!.....Must what? Write a sequel?
1279240 Hey, I'm not complaining that you liked it!
1279249 Be careful, man! Too much D'aaaawing could make your heart explode!
1279251 Love to hear it.
1279252 Not sure what I'd do with a sequel, but I'll toss some ideas around. Thank you for the comment though!
1279258 I'd hate to burn through them so quickly, but I'll make a few more eventually.
1279289 Woooooo! More mustaches!
1279392 Thank you! And awesome icons!
1279396 Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback, it really helps me as an author. I'll keep that in mind for the next one.
this'll be in the feature box in...
a few moments. 
edit:
eheh. it's already in the Popular Stories bar. :)
wow this was great, a breath of fresh air in short one shots.
I read the comments first, but that just built up my expectations a tad. Still very cute and good, because who wouldn't want a filly Rainbow Dash to hug at night?
Although, I may have preferred it in first person rather than second, for in second I feel less attached than in the other persons, if that makes any sense...
Anyway, yes... Well done!
(Also, I am pleased by the word count.
)
1279392 Mr. Carnage? The one who solved the case of the serial killer in equestria!?
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1279862 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png Dude! You are my favourite person now! Are you following the sequel?
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Aww, that was adorable. Have a star.
SOOOO CUTE!!!!
*Squee*
Well, this is something I've never seen before. Though short, it looks daftly cute
+1
1279877 Really? I dont see your name on the favourites list so u might want to check that my friend.
1279527 Oh, I don't know if this'll make the features box, but if it does I'll be SO happy. :D
1279576 I appreciate the positive feedback. Have a Twilight.
1279794 I'm actually shocked (and overjoyed) at the positive comments. And thank you for being one of them.
Stupid wish fuflment story not cute, not sad, not anything good about this, oh and if anyone thinks this is trolling this is something called criticism. Ever heard of it?
Buddy, I am very proud of you for being featured.
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Is too cute.
1279905 Oh... That may be why I have not noticed any new chapter's... HERP DERP!
Oh my Luna, The D'awwww Levels are of the charts.
SO CUTE
OMFG!!! You made be die of D'AWWWWWW
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You forgot the OC tag.
1280028 There is no OC....the person is YOU.
Cute: Definetly
Short: Unfortunetly
Referance to My Little Dashy: Expanentially so
A decent read, i enjoyed it.
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I wub this so much. So berry much.
1279933
What the hell do you think is 'cute' then?
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1280151 Furry kittens and cats
I expected this to be one of those cheap 'cute just for the sake of being cute' fics. And it was, but in this case it was well written enough that I didn't mind at all.
Loved the MLD reference.
Loved it absolutely!
This earns the Changeling seal of approval
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Fave , like,and watch for you
Yes! Finally, some innocence and cuteness that doesn't involve sex! Some real, pure cuteness with no lust involved! Thumbs up and more, I give you all my respect and praise for this fine piece of work
Rainbow's face when she told him about the "dream"
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Oh my god so many feels ;_;
Aye, this story makes even the most manly man feel warm and fuzzy inside.
The Great and Powerful Madara Approves of such CUTENESS!!!
Have an
OFFICIAL SEAL OF APPROVAL
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Words can't help me express my feelings about this, but memes can!
Aww. I thought you meant her future self and her past self.
Would've been adorable.
c- rate? Sure!
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1277460 You just did something that is bad luck: You rated your own story. Anyway, this story had some elements that needed some work. Like more fill and so on. I will give you 7/10 in the rating totally.
6/10 in originally
5/10 in fill
8/10 in total enjoyment
9/10 in grammar
That's all.
Pretty good. I've read cuter, but this is nice. Have a mustache:
Me mother fucking gusta mother fuckerz
Your wordcount has amused me.
Huehuehuehue.
Those feels you get when it hits you that you'll never get to cuddle with a filly rainbow.