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Eternal Harmony

Harmony is a funny thing. Often depicted as the pinnacle of control, it can only itself be controlled through six certain gems.

Or... Can it?

Twilight Sparkle is about to learn firsthoof a lesson a thousand millennia in the making.

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Prologue: Lessons of the Past · 23rd Dec 2011 · 926 words
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Chapter I: Just an Average Day · 5th Jan 2012 · 1,265 words
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#1 · Dec 23rd, 2011 · · · Prologue: Lessons of the Past ·

Pretty good so far.

Angel

Angel #2 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · · Chapter I: Just an Average Day ·

I like where this is going.

Bridgebrain

Bridgebrain #3 · Mar 30th, 2012 · · · Chapter I: Just an Average Day ·

Very interesting indeed :) Can't wait to see where you take this :)
Oh, and as to... well, tips is the wrong word. Anyway, outstanding foreshadowing in the prologue, when followed by this. Keep that foreshadowing and slight bit of mystery at every turn you can.

Mossflower