*Origin of the Foreverse.
Leaf Disc, famously known as DJ INS4NITY, has had it with all the paparazzi, the crazed fans, even his snobby marefriend. So he does what any sane pony with a large amount of wealth would do; he fakes his own death. Finally escaping all of the annoyances of being a celebrity, he moves to the small town of Ponyville. Can he keep his staged death under wraps or will it blow up in his face and lose him all of his only true friends?
Awesome cover art of Leaf Disc by Xaxalot2774. Visit his deviant art page to see more of his work!
Edited by: Sanity
Well well well this looks quite interesting.
I like it, but remember that every time a different person says something, make a new paragraph, it's a little hard to read at the moment. For now you've captured my interest; tracked to see where this goes.
alright, by popular demand, ill be re-writing both chapters this weekend in 1st person view. m'kay?
and i'll be added some thing extra that may take longer but will make physicalsound happy...
this story went through an entire make over, hope you like it!
put it through moderation again because of how drastically the story changed, it'll be back up soon
Better. I like it. Onward to ch 2!
Ps here take this
Mwahaha! First after edit
more like chapter 3
Another chapter?! Christmas came early. I like where this story is going.
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dont downgrade yourself dude, my CH come out faster but they are about half the size of your chapters
I really need to stop making christmas come. im not santa...
or am i? dundundun DUN
pony santa?
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lol,i dunno know, but i was planning on having sonata have a part in the drunk story i you dont mind, and he did make a quick appearance in chapter one if you didnt notice
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hohoho, now come sit on my lap little one,
*cough* rape *cough*
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sorry, i meant chapter 2,
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sonata or leaf has to be your fic?
not very clear on that
I'm sure my comment means nothing to you, but good chapters
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nah, all fans of this fic opinions' matter. if i didn't listen to them, this fic would suck right now
1310018 lol yea I would be afraid to read the story from before not to sound rude, because the comments on it where definitely meh. Besides the story is much better now then a second person Pov
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looking back on it. it really did suck, thats where the dislikes originated...
1310051 Haha
yup, and thats what screwed this fics chances of being featured, bad first impression on its time on the home page as a new fic>>1310058
1310051 Well right now I'm making a Need For Speed story, and let me tell you this story is going to be a lot of work. Nah but for real it is so I'll do some commenting with you in a bit
alright, but i haz lots o homework, the main reason why chapter 5 isnt being worked on right now
1310078 Yea home work is a bitch
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yes, yes it is. But the bitch is gone now.
1310723 Lol the whole bitch thing with the comment made me laugh yea I just got done with my bitch a while ago
I got a free sandwich. it waz delicious. 1310812
1310830 Hey you knuckle head next time eat a salad you fat bald bastard lol
Hey! im not bald nor am i fat. im quite thin actually, i can never manage to gain any weight...1310842
1310847 lol I know your pain but hey it's good to have a stable weight
And having a nice tan doesn't hurt any. being half middle eastern half Norwegian is awesome.
Ah yes I lurve it!
I thought chapter 2 was a bit slow (and poorly edited (sorry for being a dick))
But you definatly picked it up in the next two chapters!
I absolutly love the mane 6 interaction, (although rainbow was a little oc)
And with vynil scratch, I see what you are going to do
There
All and all, 8.5/10.
Very good.
And if you need an editor, hit me up.
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thanks! and you're right about the rainbow part, but to make her out to be a big fan of him I had to ooc her a bit
Epic plot twist no-jutsu!1320276
Le gasp! not only a new chapter, but Disc and Scootaloo are related? What a twist.
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Related, but not by blood. Soarin and Spitfire are her parents, and Disc is like a godfather to Scoots, always spending time with him because Spitfir and Soarin were always busy
that makes sense.
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It's also the reason how she could tell it was Disc even with his disguise on.
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thanks, and i had to re-read chapter 1 again to make sure i didn't screw up, but i also wanted Sonata to lead a happier life in this fic
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You also have to consider he's been his neighbor for two years and he did nothing wrong with Vinyl, even while being more drunk than the time he painted the entire north canterlot wall yellow and covered it in pillow feathers...
Related some what.... O.o
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exactly.
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U mad Pinkie?1360199