Plus, fillies love doughnuts. And Doughnut Joe loved the fillies even more than he loved doughnuts.
It really wasn't bad until this part creeped me out a little. I'm not going to li, this story may get more hate than it really deserves due to the whole underage thing. People did that with my 'incest' story (it wasn't incest because Applejack was just a nail and a screw. Two inanimate objects, anyways...). This is pretty interesting, at least it grabs attention. One thing you might wanna change is the fact Lyra and Bon Bon are mares, not fillies... That was a little weird. Anyways, I actually laughed at how frisky Lyra and Bon Bon were, and with Doughnut Joe XD. He must have more than just a cream filled long John
It really wasn't bad until this part creeped me out a little. I'm not going to li, this story may get more hate than it really deserves due to the whole underage thing. People did that with my 'incest' story (it wasn't incest because Applejack was just a nail and a screw. Two inanimate objects, anyways...). This is pretty interesting, at least it grabs attention. One thing you might wanna change is the fact Lyra and Bon Bon are mares, not fillies... That was a little weird. Anyways, I actually laughed at how frisky Lyra and Bon Bon were, and with Doughnut Joe XD. He must have more than just a cream filled long John
What??
Lesbian sex on his doorstep XD? Wtf XD?
lol i can already see the suspicious "free doughnuts" van with pedo joe inside somewhere in ponyville
ok you got me hooked, gonna keep reading
Frisky fillies. Was that intentional?
....well at least we know he's a MAYUHN among men