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It's not terribly easy being a pear selling pony in an apple loving town....Forelle is a pear pushing pony from Roam, here to help her family out and find her way in the world. This is what happens to her in the course of an average day.
Forelle created by Egophillaic
(Oh neat the update made the featured bar, thanks everypony!)
-Squeak
-Squeak
Forelle glared at the Mare who dared say she was struggling to keep her family happy like she was. Causing the orange pony to back away slightly.
"Whats yer problem."
"Struggle?! You don't know the meaning of the word!"
Now the mare looked as if she were slapped. "Hey don't think we don't have it hard! We..."
"Did you eat this morning? Because I didn't! Are you worried about being kicked from your home because you can't pay rent? Because I am! Does your entire livlihood depend on a single tiny tree tht barely grows a third of one of those apple trees I see in the distance? NO!"
"I'm tired, hungry, I'll be sleeping on a bench by the end of the week because I sent my last few bits back home to feed my starving younger siblings in Roam who were lucky to have a single loaf between them a day before I left. Don't you dare try to compare our livings because it is absolutly insulting and only shows how ignorant you truely are."
PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!
I love pears, that stallion has no taste
idea she uses the bits to buy the apples at low prices places them next to her pears (which i find dilicious by the way) making the apples look better so she can sell them at enflated prices then after a while she can bring the price of the pears down and sell more to make more so she can buy more seedlings pears trees so that when they start proudceing she can slowley start to phaxe out the apples once more people start buting her pears untell she can become an independent seller
I AM BEING BRILLIANT
Alrighty then, deal. I'm writing this story as the day progresses (Everything you see has been written since I woke up) so the next chapter isn't penned yet, but is getting penned as we speak. In the mean time PM me any errors you found in the previous two chapters if you would mind. Thanks for the help!
-Squeak
I dislike pears, but if I were in Ponyville, I would not hesitate to buy some of her damned merchandise to give her some money to buy some food.
Awaiting further releases.
EDIT: You might want to add the 'OC' character tag if Forelle is yours
Never you mind, she's not yours, but you did well in giving that comic some more story.
Poor kid, maybe trip to the library of Ponyville could help her out. I mean what better way of learning a new way of sell than from a book right ? 
Still it was a nice update and a nice way of showing the old "judge a book by its cover" idea. 
Pelase do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.
Will read late but...mmm...
By, "Forelle created by John Joseco ", do you mean the cover art or the actual character?
'Cause the comic the cover art is from is by emlan. Specifically here.
Talking about the good Doctor, could you be so kind as to advice me to HOW to properly watch the show? I have principles of watching from the beginning unless it can be skipped, but I do not know if I can do that. And it will take me forever to reach the Tenth Doctor from the First if I start from the beginning. Should I watch the first episode, or could I start anywhere?
There are several ways to start I suggest starting with 'New Who' which started in 2004 with the ninth Doctor. The effects aren't the best but the writing is great and you'll quickly fall in love if you happen to like scifi to any degree. Another good starting point is season five which starts off with the 11th Doctor and which you can start with little to no background knowledge.
Hope it helps!
-Squeak
If you didn't notice, that was most likely the good Doctor. The Doctor may have his dislikes if he so wishes.
Also, I used to love PEERS, but now they have a tendency to taste wet, yet dry and sweet yet sour in a chaos that is rather despicable. So as of now, APPLES is a force truly great, while the despicable PEERS can die in Tartarus for all I care!
...but if it helps Forelle, I'll gladly eat some...PEERS now and then. Ugh.
Interesting story. The moment I saw that comic panel I knew someone was goin to make it into a fic sooner or later, and you seem to have executed it very well.
On an unrelated note...
It's... odd. Whenever I read a story involving Big Macintosh he's either portrayed as a secret genius who simply doesn't like being near others, or a complete idiot who needs to be told what to do but has a 'good heart'. I'm assuming this stories going for the latter?
Yes, it was a reference, but really, I have the misfortune of having my formerly beloved PEERS' magnificent taste warped into such a detestable one. So from now on, I despise PEERS.
...why do I spell and pronounce it PEERS? Because The Doctor utters...their name... Like PEERS!
Interesting, though I think it lingers on the border of [Sad]. Also, having read the comic, I grimaced when Applebloom hit that pear away (I mean, funny comic, just OOC), but you subverted it nicely. ^^
I do have a question though: where are the Flim Flam brothers? They're supposed to be in the fic, aren't they?
Now now now, I wake up today and I found a fanfiction whit a pony speaking my native language ... and it was was cute even if sad ...
Istant fav! 
Yet Forelle need some cheese everypony know that there is nothign more fabulous than pear and cheese or to said it in roamian "al contadino non far sapere quanto è buono il formaggio con le pere."
I feel like everything is getting worse and worse for Forelle, and if you intend to end this tragically then I must say you have a done so perfectly since I now have this growing hope that every little thing will work out for her in the end. You play with my feelings, No one has done that in a long long time.
>>1848702 Despite their kindness in the previous chapter? It's not their fault nopony knows what a pear is! In case you forgot, the Apple Family struggles with money too, just a bit! (Though it would be easier on her if she and Mac fell in love. XD Then she could have her own small orchard and stuffs. Buuuuuuut this doesn't have a romance tag, so... ; ; She will have to figure something else out...)
>>1848921 Personally I don't Big Mac's romance.
Anyways, in truth the brothers are not bad, they are bussiness ponies. They offered the apples a good deal I think and they only were denied because of apple pride (which we have seen always ends up biting them). The only mistake in that episode is that they bet the rights to sell cider, not the farm.
Hopefully this won't hurt out pear pony, but I guess it will, the story gives me that feeling.
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What in tarnation?
I intentionally misspelled it because that's how I pronounce it nowadays.
If not, my sarcasm-o-meter is not going off.
But still there good. I thought apples were rubbish too.LOL
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