I still have yet to finish the latest chapter, but I do have one small complaint: I, and this may just be me, think that you should've gone a bit more in depth on the part where White Steam is about to kill his best friend. Like, describe what he was feeling just a bit more before he killed her, and what she was doing while being tied up. Something about him looking into her scared eyes, like he's not about to do it.
STORM YOU NEED TO MAKE PART TWO IMMEDIATELY WHY IS IT NOT HERE YET I WANT SOME MORE ACTION, EXCITEMENT, AND TIME WITH LYRA AND DARING DO OH COME ON MAN I KNOW YOU HAVE IT IN YOU!
I love this story I look forward to the next chapter.
I'm curious how they want to destroy the big blimp
I still have yet to finish the latest chapter, but I do have one small complaint:
I, and this may just be me, think that you should've gone a bit more in depth on the part where White Steam is about to kill his best friend. Like, describe what he was feeling just a bit more before he killed her, and what she was doing while being tied up. Something about him looking into her scared eyes, like he's not about to do it.
BUT HEY MANG, GREAT STORY SO FAR!
STORM YOU NEED TO MAKE PART TWO IMMEDIATELY WHY IS IT NOT HERE YET I WANT SOME MORE ACTION, EXCITEMENT, AND TIME WITH LYRA AND DARING DO OH COME ON MAN I KNOW YOU HAVE IT IN YOU!
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Great chapter! Can't wait till the next one.