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keithsterling


I started writing went I started college, I continued writing then.

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If you make it this far, you want to find out what? First off, please toss away your own personal canon temporarily and just think this canon out.

What if?

Celestia and Luna's so-called retirement from ruling Equestria was a sham, and they never remained in silver shoals (the only time you saw them there was during the last problem).

What if?

Their another reason for saying they retired to silver shoals? (It was a cover story)

What if?

They never planned to hand Equestria over to Twilight Sparkle, or it was only temporarily (how about for three hundred years give or take a hundred years), and Twilight Sparkle never knew of this wrinkle (because they want her to rule as the ruler of Equestria without worrying about their return).

What if?

Now we are getting into Generation five with the breaking of the three crystals.

What if?

The three crystals only shattered because Celestia and Luna failed to return after three hundred years to rule Equestria once again. Slowly each pony breed started to mistrust each other because they didn't know why the three crystals broke (it was easy to blame each other for them).

Now Sunny Starscout and her friends are about to learn the answers to some of those what-if questions. There is a legend about an ancient ruin of a grand castle somewhere in Bridlewood forest; it is said to be guarded by three ancient unicorn spirits.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 21 )

Very interested In seeing where this story is going

11130069
Thank you daba zaba :raritywink:

Excellent new chapter

tia is the planner of the two sisters, while Luna is the one to get what needs done, done.

Comment posted by keithsterling deleted Feb 22nd, 2022

Oh that was so good

This story confuses me. At first I thought that the ponies were normal. A couple chapters in I found out they are anthros. Wich one are they author. Seriously celestia a husband why I can't see her getting married. She's been alive for a thousand years. She probably had plenty of time to get married and she didn't t. I was expecting luna to be the one to get married, plus she is more wife material than her sister is. Plus how would a relationship work between celstia a husband work, It would be weird and uncomfortable, because of how old she is and how young her husband would be. He could be considered a kid to celstia. Good story by the way im loving it , but can be a little hard to read with the typos here and their. Also confusing at times.

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To answer the question about their relationship and the age difference between them. Prince Justice Silverlight is a pony know as a Imperial Alicorn. This Alicorn breed is much older then what they call planetary bound Alicorns like Celestia and Luna are. It in response to many Fanfic and pics that talk and show celestia and Luna parents being some kind higher Alicorn. So I created this breed to answer what kind of Alicorn their parents are. The age of the Imperial Alicorn breed is since the begin of time, so much older then Celestia age which about 1,000 years old. So Celestia is the kid and not Justice.

It anthro as I say hands and not hoofs.

And the typos I use an online program called Grammarly it work great. But if I don't catch the change it puts it in difference context. That why I post the story here and listen to it after I post it. So once it up I fix it.

For Luna I use her as Aunt for Celestia's own foals.

Thanks for the reply. I probably missed where it says that they are anthros, because sometimes I don't have the patience to read word by word so I will sometimes skim the chapters of fanfiction I read. If it's something I find really good. Then I will try to read word by word. Plus I didn't look at the story tags. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ I usually ignore celstia and luna having parents when fanfics have them. Because Lauren Faust said they don't have parents that outrank them or any sibiling or children. Plus when fanfic writers give them family it usually isn't very good, Just a personal opinion of mine. There are some good out their. This is a interesting story so I don't mind.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Thank you dragongodophis.
And welcome I answer some of my comments went asked. :twilightsmile:

*reads story summary*

What?

"But through all that, I follow the will of my great grandmother, the Empress! And the prime directive she set for my people, the Imperial Alicorns, will not interfere with any planet's time progression, be it good or bad. But donโ€™t think that my people forget what was lost; we collect artifacts and the whole history of that planet. Those items are stored for eternity in great library citadel station under watchful eyes of the timekeeper.โ€ Justice explains as a spasm of irritation crosses the twilight face.

Where have heard crap like this before? OH RIGHT. The STAREGATE Franchise, where the FU..UPS of the ancients are the DIRECT cause of 96-97% minimal of the major problems in LEAST 3 galaxies.

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Never watched StarGate? They never interfere, they never ect., they never ect., they never ect., they never ect., they never ect., they never ect., they never ect., mainly because if they did their enemies would know EXACTLY where to look. They ascended as an escape route because their "Guardianship" had made more than a few capable enemies and payback was killer, literally.

i havent read this but why does the cover look like a foot fetish pic

11177924
No it does not the pic on the cover was only one I had. :twilightblush:

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