A Dream Come True

When a quiet teen's dreams become the subject of ponies, he starts to question his sanity, but when those dreams become reality his world is totally changed.

Chapters (3)

A Dream Like Many Others · 13th Sep 2012 · 1,089 words
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A Dangerous Encounter · 19th Sep 2012 · 839 words
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Chapter 3 · 31st Dec 2012 · 778 words
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Heath of Tragedy

Heath of Tragedy #1 · Sep 13th, 2012 · · · A Dream Like Many Others ·

Don't use wall of text, nobody likes that. Other than that, it's interesting

CanterlotGuardian

CanterlotGuardian #2 · Sep 13th, 2012 · · · A Dream Like Many Others ·

The elevators are on the fare wall.”

should be

The elevators are on the far wall.”

also like BronyGC said, wall of text annoys a lot of people, so try more paragraphs next time.

still a good story, though. you've got my interest.

Dawn-Designs-Art

Dawn-Designs-Art #3 · Sep 13th, 2012 · · · A Dream Like Many Others ·

Yeah, what they said, and a new line for each new speaker, otherwise this looks like it has the potential to be a really good story

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oisdfwsdfwe #4 · Sep 13th, 2012 · · · A Dream Like Many Others ·

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TaylorDash

TaylorDash #5 · Sep 13th, 2012 · · · A Dream Like Many Others ·

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Wow we have spammers on fimfic now? Good story, just need some lines.

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XxX_ArCt1c-S3RB_420XxX #6 · Sep 13th, 2012 · 1 · 1 · A Dream Like Many Others ·

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i hope i was clear enough.