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Even if it's far from perfect, Applejack and Rarity have the life they've always wanted. But with continuous droughts and rising water prices, life on a farm planet is quickly becoming more than either of them bargained for. Stuck between a tightening water budget and raising their kids, when a sudden disaster throws their narrow but workable plans into the gutter they will have to make a choice to save their family, no matter the cost.

Entry for Bicyclette's Science Fiction Contest

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Comments ( 6 )

I just rewatched Interstellar and your fic kind of gives me those vibes just based on the description, I can’t wait to read it and let you know what I thought of it! :pinkiehappy:

Definitely going back to the roots of space opera in westerns. :twilightsmile: Thank you for sharing.

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Yes, space opera westerns are my jam. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Nice, been awhile since I've seen a space opera/western

“Right, and I suppose I’ll just grab a gravity shovel and go dig up those diamonds I’ve been hiding out in the bellfruit orchard. Or was the pumpkin patch?”

great title drop!

They slowly shared one of their long kisses, moments that had become scarce since the accident, when they became Little Mac’s only guardians.

loved how much is said here in so little

Applejack opened her eyes, unsure of what had woken her. She lay in bed, tangled under the bedsheets with her partner. Heavy curtains with intricately sewn sequin patterns blocked out the orange light of dawn. Curled against her shoulder stump, Rarity laid under the covers with her head sprawled over Applejack’s chest, an unflattering dribble of dried drool across her face.

augh, loved this bit! the detail with the sewn sequin was a great touch, and i could just feel the warmth and coziness of their love against the cold of their circumstances

Or was that really Rarity running towards her with a hover-barrow?

can't have a space western setting without a hover-barrow!

“But, I guess you were brave today. Only question is, do you get a reward that bravery, or a punishment for not heeding me.”

it's definitely the RariJack that made this line work for me

“You’ll always be my darling.” She kissed her.

And Rarity kissed her back. “And you’ll always be my sugarcube.”

loved this reversal of their catchphrases, very touching

“You gotta go,” Applejack finally whispered into Rarity’s lips. “Any longer and I ain’t gonna be able to pull through this.” The simple touch of Rarity’s finger on her neck as they pulled away cascaded chills and excitement through her.

But it only made it doubly painful when they finally left.

beautiful way to end the scene, i felt chills too


this was a great transplantation of RariJack to a space western AU, with their chemistry just pitch-perfect and beautiful. i really felt, and loved, their love! not just for each other, but for the little family that they've put together through their past tragedies. and the little details, like Rarity wearing her best dress because it didn't fit in the suitcase, the way Applejack's mechanical arm affected how she interacted with the environment and people around her, really brought the themes of the story together. thank you for it!

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