Rainbow Dash, being famous for her great story telling, passes down the old legend of the 11:59 death train to twilight and the gang, you know, just to spook 'em, but things get a little weird when she hears the dreadful groan of the Death Train's lonely whistle. Cheating death is what she has to do to now.*TickTock* Time is running out.
Good concept story but it felt rushed.
Well, I'm just going to say that there is little originality in this story. It's just the story of the 11:59 death train, but with different characters. It's virtually identical.
ehhh....props for trying
It wasn't supposed to be original. It was meant to be practically the same just with different characters. I wanted to do this for the people who haven't heard the legend of the 11:59 so I wanted to keep it closest to the original story as I could. 1284754
no es mala historia pero personalmente no me gusto