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Melesse Lindenya
Elen síla lúmenn' omentielvo. Estaxen yando Undómë Tinwë.
Melesse Lindenya
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"Oh, Twilight, darling, would you be a dear and make sibling incest legal? For me? Please?"
A louder literary proclaimation that shit is about to hit the fan can hardly be imagined.
Átye ista sinome nar néri ar nísi tyázar i pentenna. I hope that I did not butcher the grammar too badly.
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Okay, been busy the last few days, but I can finally sit down and try to figure this one out.
"Átye" is the second-person imperative, so "Átye ista" would be "you know" in the imperative (which is probably better than "Á istat", which is how I'd have done it by default). "Sinome" = here. "nar" = "is" (though I think that's the plural and you probably want the singular "na" here, since the subject ("tye") is singular). "néri ar nísi" = "men and women". "tyaz-" is Qenya, and so not valid Quenya, though I don't know what the Neo-Quenya form of it would be (for all I know, it would actually be "tyaz-"). "mel-" might be the better choice for "like"? "Pentenna" is allative, so "towards the front"?
I think this is supposed to be "know you that here is men and women that like the beginning." I'm curious about the choice of the allative for "pente," but otherwise this seems about as well as I'd be able to do.
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That bad, huh? I wrote it the night after studying a primer while pretending to watch training videos for work. I recall thinking that mel- would apply more to a friend than to a favored object and that the suffix that I used on pent- signified it as a direct object, but beyond that I have trouble following my own logic. Oh well, at least writing it was more fun than rewatching the active shooter safety video.
Oh, and I was trying to say that there are folks who are enjoying your story. Stupid present perfect tense. Why didn't I keep it simple?
I understood that reference.
These cliffhangers are killing me, absolutely killing me.
Oh dear, this secrets not gunna last long
Yup, that open window is just the calm before the storm.
I really want to see horses riding other horses while trying to whack a ball on the ground using long mallets held in their teeth.
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I would suspect Gabby Gums, but one-third of her was already in the room.
Now I am just waiting for their parents to come knocking. It's a short walk from their lakefront house.
She's kind of right. There is no such thing as bad press.
This year? She and her friends released a chaos god and poisoned their teacher. It is a wonder that it took her this long to figure out that she can get away with anything.
Twilight might want to pump the brakes on that particular avenue of condemnation. After all, she is inevitably going to be on one end or the other of that kind of relationship in a few short decades unless she plans to marry her widowed sister-in-law.
This conversation with Twilight was greatly written. I could feel the tension between two great friends talking about something they needed to but didn't want to.
I can't say I'm loving this enough, but I am, and another cliffhanger? Good gosh.
Apple Bloom and Scootaloo not immediately jumping at a poorly thought-out and dangerous scheme that is sure to get them into trouble? Wow, this must be really bad.
Lel, of course Sweetie Belle's solution is to set things on fire.
Love it when authors just drop multiple chapters out of nowhere!
I liked it from start to finish, character interactions felt genuine and while you could question some actions here and there you could really relate and also understand why the characters chose to do them. Solid job, and that epilogue was way too cute!
Read the whole story. Now here's my review.
Loved it.
That's honestly all i can say about this. This actually is now on my top 2 favorite fimfiction stories. Yes you read that right, top 2.
Firstly, being an anarchist, i just love a story that portrays how the current capitalist industry is actually damaging artists and killing their souls from inside out. Thank you for that.
Second, i love how the relationship between Sweetie and Rarity is writen. You can quite clearly see Sweetie has gotten depended on this relationship since it is the only way for her to escape from the reality she has gotten herself trapped in. And that's like the perfect problem for this story, having Sweetie and Rarity slowly work their way up to actually improving their relationship.
I also love the endind. Obviously it wouldn't make sense for Sweetie to stay in the industry since that was what was causing her the pain to begin with. And i love how you added that not everyone has gotten used to their relationship this early on. I don't have anything against stories that end with "Oh okay so they're in love we'll just have a little argument but we'll completely accept it in the end" however i do love some realism here and there. Not gonna add any more words since i can't find them right now.
I'll give this a 10/10. Definitely adding to favorites.
Who is in control~
I can feel the emotions so well!
And the song lyric titles are superb, loved how they develop.
This has to be the best kind of incest that naturally comes with a good drama.