It's Autumn, meaning it's the start of cider season for the Apple Family. After a successful map mission to the Peaks of Peril, Applejack invites her kirin friend to sample some of Sweet Apple Acres' finest cider. Applejack didn't expect what would happen next.
Cover Art: Autumn Blaze
Artist is by mirroredsea
I mean Minuette is the light of the party out of twilight's old friends ( which she is still in contact with them ) maybe not as hyper level as Pinkie Pie or silverstream or Gabby and certainly autumn but she's is there
Okay just want to give you a little heads-up I felt like you said that already and it's a little mix up either that was supposed to come in when autumn arrives or something I don't know that really threw me off
"Great," Rainbow muttered, "Now there's two of them!"
"Two of who?" Pinkie and Autumn said at the same time. Rainbow face-hoofed hard.
Lol Pinkie and Autumn will get along amazingly
Ok that's actually really funny even though some of the sentence was a little mixed up as I said on my last comment but it's pretty cool to see autumn actually coming to Ponyville just to see Applejack how she does and she even give her a tour of Ponyville she even saw a lot of creatures that she never seen before and of course perfect time for apple cider season but apparently Autumn Blaze cannot handle the drink and basically she is a little tipsy 😅 this is a pretty good one probably fix the sentence I pointed out but other than that I like it keep up the good work
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Thank you for spotting. The computer froze and so got mixed up in the editing
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Oh ok I got you
Sounds like a good title for a child’s book.
Courtesy of Maud, of course.
Because it made for a good running gag, that's why.
This seems out of place. Especially with the abrupt end to the sentence.
moar kirin shenanigans!
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If you give a Kirin a Cider...she'll want a bucket of water to go with it...
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