Twilight Sparkle has near unlimited magical aptitude, crippling social anxiety, and a wicked pregnancy fetish. Her fantasies are often far more complicated and involved than the average pony.
Twi, you need to get laid. Or maybe volunteer to be a surrogate mother. Not acting on this kink is driving you crazy(er).
I think the lack of editing added to the dreaminess of the chapter. I didn't spot any spelling issues, and the stream of conciousness style of your unedited stuff is fitting for the reveal it was all a dream. These little slice of life stories about Twi's interests are a lot of fun.
Twi, you need to get laid. Or maybe volunteer to be a surrogate mother. Not acting on this kink is driving you crazy(er).
I think the lack of editing added to the dreaminess of the chapter. I didn't spot any spelling issues, and the stream of conciousness style of your unedited stuff is fitting for the reveal it was all a dream. These little slice of life stories about Twi's interests are a lot of fun.
This chapter was incredibly enjoyable